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Ah yes. j v j
Sorry LOLOL; First time ordering from a writing shop. Haha /nib oTL
Alright, well I sent trade anyways. I hope that's fine. <333

Haha, that's alright! I'll try to get it done in a few hours.
Miruki Kimberly Urukai> Sweet! Should I send a trade or did you want me to wait until you're happy to go ahead with the request?
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You can send trade whenever, I don't mind~
Oh!
I'll be keeping you informed of your commission, so you can ask me to make necessary corrections and such. Is that alright?
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Here you go, thank you very much for ordering!
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Trade accepted on my end~ Just complete when I send you the story <3
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Alright. ♥

Well honestly, I liked it. I like it alot infact, you perfectly wrote my characters the way their personalities should be. The story was alright, I mean.. Yeah it was real good for something I didn't have much information about. So yes, I did enjoy that alot. It was great having to read my characters in a story for the first time. Though I think one little thing that bothered me about the story was the usage of their names. I kinda think you used 'Hideaki' and 'Ume' to much, mhm. But other than that, I really liked it. Thank you. >v<
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Alright. ♥

Well honestly, I liked it. I like it alot infact, you perfectly wrote my characters the way their personalities should be. The story was alright, I mean.. Yeah it was real good for something I didn't have much information about. So yes, I did enjoy that alot. It was great having to read my characters in a story for the first time. Though I think one little thing that bothered me about the story was the usage of their names. I kinda think you used 'Hideaki' and 'Ume' to much, mhm. But other than that, I really liked it. Thank you. >v<

Thank you very much~ I didn't have much info, so I didn't really know what else to use >.< But yeap, I'll work on it~ Thank you!
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Hey sorry for the late reply, busy with family stuff. ; n ;
I'll get to work on yours and hopefully finish it by tomorrow night. I have a quick question, do you want exactly 1k words or you won't mind a few extra words after?

caleyndar

Order accepted! Just a quick question, if it were a modern setting, where exactly would they live in the world? Like Europe or America? Or am I working in a completely different dimension?
By the way, on a random note, your signature is delicious-looking. * ^ *
Ame no Tegami> It could be something like when they wake up and find they've lose their divinity, they find themselves in a completely different place from where they were. XD The original story is set in a world that is similar to ours, but celebrates different holidays / has different religious beliefs. Their lose of divinity could dump them in our world? You can set it wherever you like and find the most comfortable writing for. I was thinking a city setting, but totally up to you.

Edit: Oh, and the pixel foods are from Ducky's Cafe - you can find that in the mini shops forum, or there is a link on my masquerade art shop thread. heart
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pinkyturnip

Hey sorry for the late reply, busy with family stuff. ; n ;
I'll get to work on yours and hopefully finish it by tomorrow night. I have a quick question, do you want exactly 1k words or you won't mind a few extra words after?

caleyndar

Order accepted! Just a quick question, if it were a modern setting, where exactly would they live in the world? Like Europe or America? Or am I working in a completely different dimension?
By the way, on a random note, your signature is delicious-looking. * ^ *
It's cool. <333 Take your time honestly.
I don't mind. <3 Thankiesi n advance, and happy new years. j v j
@Miru No problem. >v<;; Yeah xD Sorry bout that. <33 No problem, and thank you too. j v j happy new years!
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Hi, there! I've written the intro, but I'm not so sure about it. Could you please check it here and tell me what you think?
I can't access that link. It says permission error.
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I can't access that link. It says permission error.

Try this?
That works! And it's awesome so far! No complaints! XD

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