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so.. its like how? we give you a picture or something?
and the writing shop is pretty slow, so you dont need to bump so often :')

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so.. its like how? we give you a picture or something?
and the writing shop is pretty slow, so you dont need to bump so often :')
It's a force of habit! I'm super used to bumping a lot and often :3
And naw, that's just the name. Everything you need to know is on the front page biggrin

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Hello! I was wondering if you'd write a fantasy story; I saw you also like Magic: The Gathering :3

Cyrus - ambitious teenage warlock; 17 years old, average height, skinny build; pale skin, fair hair tied in a pony-tail, blue eyes; wears a black tunic and pants, a blood-red cloak, and carries a wooden staff.

Kane - the King's champion knight; late 20s, tall and well-built; dark hair, gray eyes, grizzly stubble; wears the uniform of the King's Guards. Skilled warrior and captain of the guard, although he tends to goof-around and act a bit cocky.

Alus - noble King; early 30s, average build; short brown hair, brown eyes, trimmed brown beard; wears an embroidered tunic, black leather breeches, a purple cloak, and a plain gold crown. Generally competent ruler, but prone to over-thinking issues.

Cyrus strides into the castle and demands an audience with the King, intending to demonstrate his prowess with a demon he has summoned, only to be dismissed as a child. Amid the ridicule, Cyrus lashes-out, and Kane warns the kid to knock it off because he could get hurt, but Cyrus continues his assault, prompting Kane to start sparring with him. Kane is clearly more skilled, but gradually realizes something is wrong - his footwork seems off, his breastplate oddly cumbersome, his voice...like a squeaky teen's?! The demon is an age-stealer, and Kane is getting younger and younger as it drains him of his growth! Now a fresh-faced youth, Kane fights frantically as Cyrus taunts him about being forced to repeat squire training, page training, and even potty training, laughing at his high-pitched protests and struggle with his over-sized attire. Kane's attacks are rendered futile as he shrinks into a baby and Cyrus mocks his "tantrum", turning his uniform into a diaper as he cries indignantly.

Easily subduing the other guards, Cyrus presents the defeated warrior before the King with an ultimatum - step down, or be aged down. The King has trouble believing the bawling babe is his champion, but soon finds himself getting younger too! He proceeds to duel with Cyrus, but, not used to combat, his situation appears dire - his slipping headgear and sagging pants don't help as the warlock reverts him to awkward adolescence, sneering that he should quit playing at ruling a kingdom and leave it to the grown-ups. All looks lost as the King becomes a mere boy...however, a well-placed throw of his crown smashes the crystal on Cyrus's staff controlling the demon - it turns on the outraged warlock, reducing him to infancy and restoring the others before departing. Lifted from his adult trappings, Cyrus wails in frustration as Kane teases his predicament and the King muses that his champion would make a firm-but-fair father.

~~~

Hopefully that's okay, feel free to ask any questions!

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Hello! I was wondering if you'd write a fantasy story; I saw you also like Magic: The Gathering :3

Cyrus - ambitious teenage warlock; 17 years old, average height, skinny build; pale skin, fair hair tied in a pony-tail, blue eyes; wears a black tunic and pants, a blood-red cloak, and carries a wooden staff.

Kane - the King's champion knight; late 20s, tall and well-built; dark hair, gray eyes, grizzly stubble; wears the uniform of the King's Guards. Skilled warrior and captain of the guard, although he tends to goof-around and act a bit cocky.

Alus - noble King; early 30s, average build; short brown hair, brown eyes, trimmed brown beard; wears an embroidered tunic, black leather breeches, a purple cloak, and a plain gold crown. Generally competent ruler, but prone to over-thinking issues.

Cyrus strides into the castle and demands an audience with the King, intending to demonstrate his prowess with a demon he has summoned, only to be dismissed as a child. Amid the ridicule, Cyrus lashes-out, and Kane warns the kid to knock it off because he could get hurt, but Cyrus continues his assault, prompting Kane to start sparring with him. Kane is clearly more skilled, but gradually realizes something is wrong - his footwork seems off, his breastplate oddly cumbersome, his voice...like a squeaky teen's?! The demon is an age-stealer, and Kane is getting younger and younger as it drains him of his growth! Now a fresh-faced youth, Kane fights frantically as Cyrus taunts him about being forced to repeat squire training, page training, and even potty training, laughing at his high-pitched protests and struggle with his over-sized attire. Kane's attacks are rendered futile as he shrinks into a baby and Cyrus mocks his "tantrum", turning his uniform into a diaper as he cries indignantly.

Easily subduing the other guards, Cyrus presents the defeated warrior before the King with an ultimatum - step down, or be aged down. The King has trouble believing the bawling babe is his champion, but soon finds himself getting younger too! He proceeds to duel with Cyrus, but, not used to combat, his situation appears dire - his slipping headgear and sagging pants don't help as the warlock reverts him to awkward adolescence, sneering that he should quit playing at ruling a kingdom and leave it to the grown-ups. All looks lost as the King becomes a mere boy...however, a well-placed throw of his crown smashes the crystal on Cyrus's staff controlling the demon - it turns on the outraged warlock, reducing him to infancy and restoring the others before departing. Lifted from his adult trappings, Cyrus wails in frustration as Kane teases his predicament and the King muses that his champion would make a firm-but-fair father.

~~~

Hopefully that's okay, feel free to ask any questions!
You've already written a short story there by yourself xD While I can certainly imagine how this would play out, I'd have to think about accepting it, since some of the themes make me a bit... uncomfortable o.o;;

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