Blackcat6349
Jyurri_the_Vampire
Blackcat6349
Dark and mysterious and compelling, but in need of editing for grammar, spelling and capitalization XD
Yeah, I was in a hurry. I am truly sorry.
No excuses
emotion_donotwant
Lol, I'm just teasing you. Anyway, you do get another chance if you want. (See post above your submission)
This is my revised version of my story, please forgive me for my previous errors.
Walking through dense forest, late at night,
Darkness around me, almost without any light,
A set of glowing red eyes peer at me from all the black,
Noticing them, I hesitantly stare back,
A dark figure comes close, I slowly back away,
it lunges at me, and grabs me as if nothing, I weigh,
It is a man, but not, he pins me firmly to the ground,
I try to scream, but I cannot make a sound,
He leans close, I feel breathing on my neck,
He places there, a gentle peck,
Then at once, i feel a sharp pain,
I feel him sucking, am I going insane?
A vampire, here I am going to die,
I feel weaker and weaker, and I cry,
At last he stops, and licks the bite,
I looks up at him dazed, did he keep me alive for spite?
He looks me in the eyes and asks me, am i alright,
I cant speak, try as I might,
He says to me, just close your eyes and sleep,
My eyes start closing, and I begin to weep,
They shut all the way, And I cannot see,
I must be dead, as the darkness closes around me.