Help!

[EsileKiulyn]

I've had major writers block for the past 2 months, so im coming to all of you for help.

Mini Bio

Alixe 25 years old, female, red hair, green eyes. She was taken away from her home at the age of 15, where she was placed in to a life of slavery. When a young painter offers her a chance for her to go home she jumps on it. and so she starts her journy home. she is the main characture, and she is rather stuborn, and has just recently learned that her great grand mother was a elf, and also the master of a magical tower.

Bradion 26 years old, male, brown hair, brown eyes. he is a painter, and after accidentally purchesing Alixe and being unable to pay the price, he takes her away, leading her on a journey home. he and Alixe fall in love (of course heart ) and as of now he is learning about his darker side.

Pyan 26 years old, male, blondish hair, blue eyes. he is Bradions friend, trained in both steel and in magic. he carrys a magic sword that can change from dagger to sword at a single spoken word. he has commuend with the three all powerful gods of magic. he is in love with Calian

Calian 25 years old, female, blonde hair, grey eyes. she was a slave with ALixe, and accomanyed alixe when Bradion and Pyan took her away.

Laraul- a side characture, she is younger, 16 years of age, her farm was burnt to the ground, and Alixe and her friends saved her.

Evin- a rather evil characture, he is educated in the ways of a healer, and when he healed Calain, he fell in love with her. and he is determained to have her for his own. he is 23 years old.

[EsileKiulyn]

now for a summery!

Alixe and her friends have riden through the land, crossing a mountain. just after exiting the mountain, they are attacked by dragons and elves. the elves grant the party passage through their lands for a price, and the price is taking Alixe with them.
this causes Bradion to go slightly mad. blaming himself he desides that he will find alixe by himself, and bring her back to him. he is tourchered by dreams of his scared face and the sight of Alixe in the arms of the elf that took her away.
Alixe on the other hand is enjoying her stay with the elves, she has made friends with one elf, Marcus, whom grows to love Alixe. she also learns that she is part elf. and also that she has magical abilitys.
Calian was given a potion that has caused Evin to control her thoughts. slowly she is loosing control of her body, and Evin is gaining control.
along with Pyan and Calian, Evin and his sister Laraul are following after Bradion. which leads them to the elven city.

i hope that made sence

[EsileKiulyn]

here is a little bit of the writing...just ask if you need more

Pyan rode in the lead, leading his friends through the elfin wilderness. They had passed through a large swamp, and had finally exited the muggy air. The ground had slowly grown firmer as they moved on, and now they were entering a strange forest
The ground was made of white stone, shimmering with a faint blue tint in the moonlight. Tall black trees grew out of the solid stone, their roots crawling over the ground like snakes. The leaves of the trees were two toned, shinning silver on the bottom, and emerald green on the top. Vines hung down from the trees, making this forest one of the oddest he had ever seen.
All the horses stopped suddenly, not daring to set foot on the strange stone. They could see shimmering eyes dancing though the tree trunks, the silver eyes of strange beasts like the golden deer and wraithlike wolf. The deer and the wolves moved peacefully between one and other. Their eyes caught the light of the moon and stone and reflected it like pools of water.
"Where are we?" Laraul asked, her green eyes shimmering in the moonlight. To her the dangerous forest was nothing but beauty. And that it was, but even in the most beautiful things danger could lurk.
"This is the Morith Forest. it surrounds the elfin city of Sinthaleriath." he whispered some words and a ball of flames formed in his hand. Instantly the wild animals of the forest disappeared, the golden tail of the deer slipping between the dark trees till it was out of sight. The wolf lingered longer, watching their small party with hungry eyes.
A silver bird swooped down from the trees, singing its high-pitched song. The feathers gleamed in the light and it seemed an innocent tiny sparrow till you caught a glimpse of its long dagger like claws. Laraul moved her horse closer to Pyan and Evin. Still the mystical forest held her gaze, but now the strange creatures scared her.
Evin looked around the forest with mild interest, taking note of the plant and animal life, seeing what he could collect for potions. He cast a sly glance over at Calian. She sat astride her horse, staring numbly in to the forest. So my pretty, do you like what you see? Since he controlled her mind Evin found it easier just to commentate with his charge through her mind. Even though Pyan was grateful for Evin saving Calian, he still doubted the young man. For good reasons. Each passing moon the power he held over Calian grew. Maybe if the blundering mage had realized earlier what was happening he may have been able to save his love, but soon, with in a week the spell would be irreversible.
You b*****d! I can’t even show the awe the forest inspires in me. Came Calian’s bitter retort. She knew what was happening, she could feel the power growing over her. The voices in her head got louder, blocking out her own thoughts, so Calian was isolated in her small world. Evin would probe each of her answers before she said them, causing her to sound stony and uncaring. She could see the worry in Pyan's eyes but there was nothing she could do. There was no way to tell him. Evin read each of her thoughts.
Hush my love. Everything will be fine. Now, do you want to break the poor mans heart now or later? Evin cast a smile her way, and then catching that Pyan was looking at him he glanced away, bending down to stroke his horse. He can’t save you now. You know that don’t you.
Calian could feel the tears forming in her eyes, or at least what should have been tears. She knew there was nothing she could do, but watch as she destroyed the man she loved. She was sure that Evin would completely crush Pyan, leaving him a crushed empty husk. He would never be the same, because the words filled with venom would be coming from her mouth. Pyan gave her a shy smile. And Evin let her smile. For once she could actually smile. Pyan was so adorable, his eyes filled with love and concerned, and there was nothing she could do.
"Shall we continue on in to the forest?" Pyan asked, raising the hand with the burning ball in it. "Remember stay close." he turned Farron and lead the party in to the forest, the fire above his head casting light down on the stone, turning it a blood red.
Alixe stood shaking, the effects of the bolt of electricity making her body shake. She felt like she had just recovered from flu. Her hand was red, with thin lines, like veins, running up to her shoulder.
In the mirror across from her she could see her self, her flaming red hair standing almost on end, creating a light, fiery halo. Her eyes were a vibrant green, like the leaves of the tree below. Her skin was just as pale and as smooth as the day she had left the Treasure Chest, but a fine sprinkling of freckles had sprung up along her nose.
Alixe looked down at the book, casting her gaze down on to the page that had shocked her. The page laid, a hole burnt through where her finger had touched it. The rest of the page was lost in black ash. Carefully she closed the book, making sure she didn’t disturb any of the ashes.
Behind her the toppled bookcase lay in chaos. The broken glass shone and sparkled as light came through the window. Liquids were all over the floor, seeping though her soft leather shoes. Hastily she moved her foot aside, watching as the liquids crept along the floor to the wall. The liquid was absorbed by the walls, leaving the floor dry.
Feeling unnerved Alixe turned away from the mess and moved to the door. She softly shut the door behind her as she made her descent down the spiralling stairwell. Her finger had started to ache, a dull throb that coursed up her arm. She rubbed her arm gently; looking at the fine network of red marks the shock had left. They stood angrily out opposite the pale skin.

[Maledicte]

maybe try simplifying it a little. concentrate on one story element for a bit and see where it takes you. if you're really having trouble getting past where you are now, stop trying to go forward. take time to go into the characters moments before. pick some people and get to know them.
do you have a plot outline? that might help.