Feedback/tips with my WIP of a Fashion model

[iHannahXD]

So... here's the image of her face. I'm trying to make the light source come from the bottom left, but I can't figure out how to get the shading of her nose more accurate. I also need feedback on how to shade her hair, at the top. Any tips? (Also, I notice that her lips are off; i can fix that though)

[KiyomiTheKawaii]

Just add some darker tones to the bang, and the shoulders could use some lengthening. It's wonderful otherwise 3nodding

[Fornicate the Constable]

The top of her head should be much darker if the light is coming from below, and the bottom part of her bangs will be more illuminated. Her nose should cast a shadow on the right side of her face, and the highlights of her eyes should be more focused on where the light is coming from.

Here's some lighting references that may help you with the lighting for the face, there are many to choose from so hopefully one can help emotion_c8

[iHannahXD]

Fornicate the Constable

The top of her head should be much darker if the light is coming from below, and the bottom part of her bangs will be more illuminated. Her nose should cast a shadow on the right side of her face, and the highlights of her eyes should be more focused on where the light is coming from.

Here's some lighting references that may help you with the lighting for the face, there are many to choose from so hopefully one can help emotion_c8

thanks so much!!! I remember seeing that reference before, and was hoping to find it again. Again, thanks sooo much!

[iHannahXD]

MichiyoyoYamashita

Just add some darker tones to the bang, and the shoulders could use some lengthening. It's wonderful otherwise 3nodding

aaawwww you're soo sweet smile and thanks for the advice