*CRITIQUE NEEDED*: Lolita in Lace (sketch)<3

[Amaryss]

Well, I am working on a piece in Painter. So far I've got the main sketch... Before I continue to the lineart, it would be really helpful to receive some critiques. 3nodding Especially with anatomical issues (not my strong point), and anything that stands out. Even if you're not sure exactly what is wrong, but something just doesn't seem right... let me know. :3 Also feel free to red line it. ^_^; (As in, make corrections by drawing over top...) The original is much bigger, but would be way too big to post... so, here you have it:



Also, I'm open to suggestions for the background/outfit/colouring, or whatever... Photo ref was used! Thanks for looking. heart

[Yuki-Naru]

Thats fething adorable. 3nodding

[Amaryss]

haha thanks. whee

[Haneru]

Mmm, the leg foreshortening just looked off, and I was forced to change the length of the other when I fixed it. Not much else really, but I felt her elbow joints were a bit thick for a delicate lolita girl. XD

[Amaryss]

thanks haneru. x3 Eh, yeah, I did have some trouble with the legs. :3