I like it, but shouldn't there be a hair line for the one with wings. Also, where does her wings attach to her back? THe guy on the left is too thin. Make the lines darker.
Wow, I'm happy... I've never thought I get this many posts in this forum...
Sepik, you're right. I'll try to make it better.
Chaosruin, I'm sure you have a reason to hate it so I'm gonna do better next time. (Heck, maybe color it...)
Oh yeah.
Sepic, it's a dude, not a girl. And the hair line isn't shown. The one with wings (Siwelton.) is more of an angelic person.
But I'm glad you pointed out those details. It let's me know you looked at it closely.
And the pencil line thing is something I really wanna work on...