Impling
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- Posted: Sat, 06 Nov 2004 19:13:09 +0000
Fire_Lizard
((Gomen Nasi is basically I'm really sorry in japanese, sorry I'm trying to teach myself other languages in between everything else, so I sometimes forget what I'm doing and switch to a different langauge. . . Sorry!! sweatdrop ))
((It's nothing to be sorry about, I was just curious. Yamato, look here is your post in third person. (It was very good by the way, and the slang is okay.)
((I'm going to apologize for a few things. First, I'm sorry for my posts being in first person. They have to be that way, otherwise my posts would only be about…two sentences long. Second, I’d like to apologize for all the slang in my posts. Again, how I RP.))
Mat was at home. Home, the name for that dingy little apartment he lived in, nothing but a bathroom, kitchenette, and the living room which doubled as his sleeping area. The place smelled like stale pizza and booze, mixed with a bit of cigarette smoke and dirty clothes. Alas, it was still his home, and his sanctuary.
Smoked myself stupid and drank my insides raisin dry.
Those were the words that rumbled out of his stereo as he lay there, staring at the ceiling. The bed was nothing but a futon, surrounded by empty pizza boxes, piles of books, and nearly a dozen video game systems. After a few minutes I sat up slowly, peering out my small window at the dark sky.
"And then it was night." He spoke quietly to himself, standing and stretching.
Walking over to the kitchenette, he put some water in a pot and lit the gas stove, my craving for Ramen overtaking my will, which told me I just ate a few minutes ago. Hell, I'm a growing man, am I not?
I hate my life. Figures., he thought to himself.
If you feel the strong urge to write in first person, do so, but its so much easier to read in third. Just make sure it's past tense, otherwise I would get mad.))