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Post: 3808060_1 created on Wed, 22 Sep 2004 02:20:51 +0000
Posted: Wed, 22 Sep 2004 02:20:51 +0000

I write a lot in my classes, cuz thats when my brain is actually working. So ima gonna post a few poems that i wrote, and i demand mean, hateful yet truthfull comments on them.

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Post: 3808060_2 created on Wed, 22 Sep 2004 02:46:18 +0000
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Post: 3808060_3 created on Wed, 22 Sep 2004 02:53:20 +0000
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I like it. heart

and i'm being HONEST. wink

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Post: 3808060_4 created on Wed, 22 Sep 2004 02:53:29 +0000
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Post: 3808060_5 created on Wed, 22 Sep 2004 03:00:51 +0000
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that's such a horrible poem.

but damn. xd

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Post: 3808060_8 created on Wed, 22 Sep 2004 03:08:32 +0000
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sean [na]

that's such a horrible poem.

but damn. xd

YAY! some one laughed! yeah tru its on the heave side, but sometimes you gotta laugh at little kids goin on killing sprees!!

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Post: 3808060_9 created on Wed, 22 Sep 2004 03:19:55 +0000
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"I'll never understand my girlfriend. I suck, I lie, I hit on other girls when shes holding my hand and yet she stays with me. She RULEZ!!"
-Zebra

My breath smells like 6:30 in the morning
and yet you kiss me
My lips taste like sweat and nastiness
and yet you kiss me
My tongue always too eagerly jumps from my mouth
and yet you kiss me
I always talk about stupid irrelevant things between kisses
and yet you kiss me
I suck at making out
and yet you kiss me
My hands go places they shouldn’t
and yet you kiss me
Your mother hates me and your father doesn’t want us together
and yet you kiss me
I yell at you and pick fights with you
and yet you kiss me
I neglect, abuse and lie to you
and yet you kiss me
you beat the crap outta me
and yet you kiss me
when we dance, I step on your feets
and yet you kiss me
I always call just as you are sitting down to eat
and yet
through it all
with un-measurable passion
with the softest love
with the sweetest
gentlest touch
you kiss me

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Post: 3808060_10 created on Wed, 22 Sep 2004 03:54:54 +0000
Posted: Wed, 22 Sep 2004 03:54:54 +0000

wow. your skillz = t3h shizznite!!

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Post: 3808060_11 created on Wed, 22 Sep 2004 03:56:45 +0000
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Your ******** is s**t, knobgobbler.. You collect c** with your a**.

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Post: 3808060_12 created on Wed, 22 Sep 2004 03:58:38 +0000
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HackySackMaster

Your girlfriend's a moron. I hope she wisens up.

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Post: 3808060_13 created on Wed, 22 Sep 2004 04:00:04 +0000
Posted: Wed, 22 Sep 2004 04:00:04 +0000

BloomingBlue

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Your girlfriend's a moron. I hope she wisens up.

You're an idiot for taking poetry literally. I hope you develop a less narcisistic and close-minded sense of literal art.

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Post: 3808060_14 created on Wed, 22 Sep 2004 04:01:18 +0000
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Jim Jesus

Your ******** is s**t, knobgobbler.. You collect c** with your a**.

******** you and you fat short ugly girlfriend! she can get on a step stool and hop on my nuts!jews Im so sick of white people comin in here ******** wit the black mans s**t. Man i swear white folk be runing ery thang man shaw cuh! MANE bump all dat! boutta riase up and overcome in this be righ heuhn!

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Post: 3808060_15 created on Wed, 22 Sep 2004 04:03:11 +0000
Posted: Wed, 22 Sep 2004 04:03:11 +0000

i wanna start by saying BLACK POWER, and end by saying, you two bitches ( and when i say bitches i mean JimJesus) need to calm the hell down.

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