Emotionless_Disaster
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- Posted: Wed, 24 Nov 2004 01:41:54 +0000
Well we needed to write a love poem for an English thing and I can't write happy poems so I wrote this poem. As it turned out I won the little contest thing in my class with this poem, even though I didn't want to win and I actually think this poem sucks since I wrote it within 5 minutes stare anyway everyone liked it but they don't count so I wanna know what you people out there think...
Not Your Average Love Poem
Why does the red rose show love?
Why is the heart the symbol for love of an eternity?
Why do people love?
Well roses die
Hearts break
And loves fades
So if these things as long as everything else dies
Why does love exist?
Why do people even want to feel this so called
Wonderful emotion that brings nothing but pain and sorrow?
Why do people even feel at all?
Words are nothing but lies to the human soul
If love is real, then it is so fragile it would break with the smallest tap
I have experienced this thing that humans call love
And it brings nothing but heartbreak and sorrow
Now I sit alone
With no one beside me
Because of him and what she went through
Slowly as I draw the blade across my wrist
My tears and blood become one
Forming into the black dark key to my heart.
He said many things this so called love of hers
He said he loved her and would never hurt her
He also said they would be together for an eternity
He was wrong and she was a fool to believe him
He never loved her and he did hurt her many, many times
And the only one who will last to an eternity is I
My lost soul
I am the last soul of a heartbroken girl
Who was fooled many times
She died of a broken heart
She cried many tears
She bled all of her blood
Until she could no longer take it
He hurt her and she broke
Breaking me as well
Love is as fragile as glass
It can take one or two hits
Like she did but on the third
Glass shatters as well as she did
And neither ever got up
He didn't mean to kill her
End her life
Sure he abused her
But deep down he still loved her
But what is that famous saying?
You hurt the ones you love
Maybe he did love her
But she sure did love him
Yet slowly she turned to hate him
I am her lost soul
And I shall wander this long path
Telling her story...
My story...
On how I once loved
This path will never end
As I will never end
I will keep going
For an eternity...
Just lemme know by commenting...
Not Your Average Love Poem
Why does the red rose show love?
Why is the heart the symbol for love of an eternity?
Why do people love?
Well roses die
Hearts break
And loves fades
So if these things as long as everything else dies
Why does love exist?
Why do people even want to feel this so called
Wonderful emotion that brings nothing but pain and sorrow?
Why do people even feel at all?
Words are nothing but lies to the human soul
If love is real, then it is so fragile it would break with the smallest tap
I have experienced this thing that humans call love
And it brings nothing but heartbreak and sorrow
Now I sit alone
With no one beside me
Because of him and what she went through
Slowly as I draw the blade across my wrist
My tears and blood become one
Forming into the black dark key to my heart.
He said many things this so called love of hers
He said he loved her and would never hurt her
He also said they would be together for an eternity
He was wrong and she was a fool to believe him
He never loved her and he did hurt her many, many times
And the only one who will last to an eternity is I
My lost soul
I am the last soul of a heartbroken girl
Who was fooled many times
She died of a broken heart
She cried many tears
She bled all of her blood
Until she could no longer take it
He hurt her and she broke
Breaking me as well
Love is as fragile as glass
It can take one or two hits
Like she did but on the third
Glass shatters as well as she did
And neither ever got up
He didn't mean to kill her
End her life
Sure he abused her
But deep down he still loved her
But what is that famous saying?
You hurt the ones you love
Maybe he did love her
But she sure did love him
Yet slowly she turned to hate him
I am her lost soul
And I shall wander this long path
Telling her story...
My story...
On how I once loved
This path will never end
As I will never end
I will keep going
For an eternity...
Just lemme know by commenting...
