Blessed Lunatic

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I wrote this acrostic (which I haven't written since, what, second grade?) when I was bored and supposed to be taking notes in class. I can't tell if I like it. Criticism is welcome and loved. Thanks!

Subliminal, the crying of the wind
Unknots my tangled, razor-wire thoughts.
I stand above the empty strait of sky,
Controlled and captive only of myself.
I shine with angels singing from on high,
Descending like a solitary star
Alight with silver crematory fire.
Life's light is mirrored in my ardent smile.