if only i knew

[ksatnod esaelp]

i hope you enjoy it critiscism is accepted and appreciated :p surprised

I read her poetry, and it stabs my heart

I have dreams, and they rip it in two

I listen to songs, that confirm my fears

I talk to a friend, who tells me to end it

I argue with my self, and it only makes it worse

I want to listen to what my heart is saying, but I dont know who it is

Is it obsession or is it love? If only I knew

[MaglinVinn]

i think i like your siggie more than i like the peice.

needs A LOT of development...

~~Vinn

[ksatnod esaelp]

MaglinVinn

i think i like your siggie more than i like the peice.

needs A LOT of development...

~~Vinn

then please tell me what i can do to develop it and improve it and thanks blaugh ....i geuss sweatdrop

[IGlowInTheDark]

Try working on your flow, as well as your word choice... not very descriptive of me, but I tried.

[ksatnod esaelp]

Candypigeon

Try working on your flow, as well as your word choice... not very descriptive of me, but I tried.

ya looking back i can see were it doesnt flow very well