But a breath

[Zer0SixX]

Life is a breath in a hurricane
swept and sundered by wind and rain
our time is brief, and ripe with pain
and in that storm we must remain.

But a breath with purpose, if timed right
is still enough to give wind form.
wind with form, though soft and warm
breath by breath survives cold night.

So wait and listen through the cold,
for the voice the wind has born,
Wait and listen - but be warned.
But a breath can break a storm.

[hoppybunny98]

i love the metaphor and the rhythm and rhyme structure is really catchy too c:

[inili]

I like the concept. 3nodding