Smextacy
Elfus Arianteus
Smextacy
Shouldn't it be either "She felt nervous all of a sudden" or "She suddenly felt nervous"?
This is just a rough draft. I'll care about editing when the first part is complete.
I know but I'm just saying if it's a topic based around a strong sentence then I thought it should be grammatically correct, idk. It's all good c:
Technically my sentence -is- grammatically correct. It could just simply stand to be stronger for a novel. But like I said, this is just a rough draft. I'll care about editing later. The proper assembly line for a story is to plan out and brainstorm your ideas, then write a rough draft. During the rough draft it is acceptable to be relaxed about your writing style. This is because later on you will be proofreading and editing. This is when you look for sentences that could stand to be stronger and when you look for grammatical errors. In the English language it is acceptable to have 'suddenly' at the position it's in. Grammatically, it is correct. That said, the two examples you gave are stronger versions of that sentence. Later during the editing process I will evaluate this sentence among so many more in my story and choose to make them stronger. But for now, what I give is the rough draft version. Chances are, many people here are doing the same. Also during the editing process, I will fix technical errors such as spelling and punctuation.
A quote I once heard: Write with your heart, edit with your mind.
Also, I never said anything about a strong sentence. I just said a favorite sentence.