✎ [HOAR's] -- NaNoWriMo -- Abandoned :(

[onceuponatimeMULE]

Just a little something for me to keep track in, and to get some feedback on excerpts, once I get started :3

WORD COUNT AS OF:

11 / 08 / 2011

0 / 50,000


TONIGHT'S GOAL:

15,000

0 / 15,000

[onceuponatimeMULE]

Plot

ADOPTED PLOT THAT IS CURRENTLY BEING RE-WORKED. EXPECT CHANGES.

Iris Kelly is a normal girl; brown hair blue eyes, average life. And it’s Halloween. Her and her friends decided to play the Ouija board because it’s Halloween and a teenage boy a few towns over just died of mysterious causes. The girls obviously don’t know the Ouija board can actually work, or they never would have tried, but they do contact the spirit of the dead boy, John. John comes out of the board, although the girls can’t see him and he sees Iris. The girls eventually give up the Ouija board because they are tired, but they don’t properly say goodbye, so John is still among them. In the middle of the night Iris wakes up and John makes himself visible to her, and such and eventually John and Iris try to find out who killed him, and they somehow fall in love a bit...

[onceuponatimeMULE]

Current excerpt

Check back later <3

[onceuponatimeMULE]

Someone please kick me in the a** and get me motivated to write... gonk //dies

[Kikinumi]

Questions:
How do Iris's friends respond to Iris seeing John?
Why does John wait to reveal himself?
Can John only see iris?
What do you mean by 'mysterious causes?'
How was John murdered?
How is his family going to be incorperated into your story?
In love with a ghost? Will the couple ever get past the boundary of 'death?'

...Does this help?

[Appelsina]

If you don't write, I'll dump milk on you. >C