Nothing

[frawggy]

[S Plissken]

Honestly, it's a performance I'd expect from elementary school children.
The rhythm of your words felt uneven at points.
The words could use more articulation. (It sounded like the words were being blended together at times)
The tone of your voice sounded dull. (Experiment with finding a more mature/richer tone)
The piece could've been sung more expressively. (Feel the energy of the music and ride with it)
The dynamic changes didn't seem appropriate in spots. (It suddenly got quieter when you started saying "dance dance", which seems like it should've be sung louder)

[Panda L]

S Plissken

Honestly, it's a performance I'd expect from elementary school children.
The rhythm of your words felt uneven at points.
The words could use more articulation. (It sounded like the words were being blended together at times)
The tone of your voice sounded dull. (Experiment with finding a more mature/richer tone)
The piece could've been sung more expressively. (Feel the energy of the music and ride with it)
The dynamic changes didn't seem appropriate in spots. (It suddenly got quieter when you started saying "dance dance", which seems like it should've be sung louder)

[white dragon system]

has potential, take your time with the words. Play it for yourself and take note of what you like
keep rerecprding the same song over and over until you like what you hear

[PanDah K]

First...Pandah L...

Second...What?...

I can't even really critique this. Sorry, it was just so bad.

[frawggy]

PanDah K

First...Pandah L...

Second...What?...

I can't even really critique this. Sorry, it was just so bad.

so then just stfu.

[frawggy]

its not that ******** bad christ

[skumskull]

frawggy

its not that ******** bad christ

But it is, tho

[frawggy]

skumskull

frawggy

its not that ******** bad christ

But it is, tho

I used to sound worse

[realduckwizard]

You're a girl! you should be singing your true voice. The thing about being a singer is that you need to follow your vocal timbre, otherwise youll end up sounding like either you're choking, kermit the frog, or arnold schwarzenegger. Try again, but in your voice.

[skumskull]

frawggy

skumskull

frawggy

its not that ******** bad christ

But it is, tho

I used to sound worse

Do you expect a pat on the shoulder for that?

[frawggy]

realduckwizard

You're a girl! you should be singing your true voice. The thing about being a singer is that you need to follow your vocal timbre, otherwise youll end up sounding like either you're choking, kermit the frog, or arnold schwarzenegger. Try again, but in your voice.

I know guys that sound like girls an girls that sound like guys. I know I can do it.

[frawggy]

skumskull

frawggy

skumskull

frawggy

its not that ******** bad christ

But it is, tho

I used to sound worse

Do you expect a pat on the shoulder for that?

im making a point that it's not that bad a*****e

[realduckwizard]

frawggy

realduckwizard

You're a girl! you should be singing your true voice. The thing about being a singer is that you need to follow your vocal timbre, otherwise youll end up sounding like either you're choking, kermit the frog, or arnold schwarzenegger. Try again, but in your voice.

I know guys that sound like girls an girls that sound like guys. I know I can do it.

But that's because of their natural timbre. It just doesn't seem like you have that it that low.

[frawggy]

realduckwizard

frawggy

realduckwizard

You're a girl! you should be singing your true voice. The thing about being a singer is that you need to follow your vocal timbre, otherwise youll end up sounding like either you're choking, kermit the frog, or arnold schwarzenegger. Try again, but in your voice.

I know guys that sound like girls an girls that sound like guys. I know I can do it.

But that's because of their natural timbre. It just doesn't seem like you have that it that low.

its not their natural timbre actually