:D I made a cover

[II kawaii crybaby II]

But I don't think anyone will view it unless I put it here it's falk for you secondhand serenade
Here's the link:
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=WXyjOdpGspA

[II kawaii crybaby II]

Fall* XXXXD

[deadly_fairy13]

You sound like you crying while singing. but its still good. I like that song.

[AkaTsuki-chan]

Breath support needs work, I think you need to learn the song better, and you sound kind of nasally. You're also using your throat to control your volume/airflow rather than your abdominal muscles, which is contributing to some intonation issues. Also can't understand a word you're saying.

[II kawaii crybaby II]

eheh sweatdrop

[II kawaii crybaby II]

i'll use your feedback and redo it XD

[II kawaii crybaby II]

but not now my stupid iPod dies so fast O:<

[Jordamn]

You sound nervous and completely static. Sing with confidence and dynamics. Let the quiet parts be quiet, but when it builds, sing loudly.
The way the original singer does it is to have fluctuating dynamics within phrases to accent lines through most of the song, with a slight build throughout peaking at the bridge, then fully soft on the down chorus, and loud again at the end chorus, but soft on the last line.

You need to practice singing more and get better control of your pitch, breath, vibrato, etc., but even just more dynamic control would make a substantial difference.

[II kawaii crybaby II]

Oh.o.o, well I was nervous it is the internet literally anyone in the world could see it,that has the internet,but uh I'll have to take your advice sweatdrop

[II kawaii crybaby II]

>: D made a better one but don't judge me it's not like i like Disney or anything .-. It was just the only song i could find that was the wright genre .-. ..... here o.o :




http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=AEacYa-RexQ





by the way I'm not in the video because I'm camera shy O.O may have gotten a few words wrong because i didn't have the words in front of me but ^_^

[gabrielle0214]

You have a great voice but you need practice smile Good job though smile

[II kawaii crybaby II]

ok i practiced ;o; XD jk but I have had more lessons :3 and now i made a better video because watching the old one it was kind of a terrible video in my opinion O.o
and yes still camera shy XD here's a link:



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nABJdgHRgeo