Lady Caprinet
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- Posted: Sun, 25 Nov 2012 03:37:13 +0000
- If it's about when people start as new trainers they can have what they want. A trainer just starting out won't be able to have a Butterfree or a Brivary. However, if they wish to start out as a trainer who has some experience then they can have an evolved Pokemon. It's an honer system that I'm using for now. Until I get a system typed up for leveling pokemon and hatching eggs. So long as the person doesn't abuse the fact that they start out like that anyone can start out with any pokemon at any stage of evolution.
It's the badges and ribbons that they can't start out with. Even if they have a relative who's a Leader or something they cannot start out with that particular badge. It has to be earned through RP.
Heheh...my crew just consists of two of my friends at the moment. And both of them are really busy. I don't want to be a bother to them, so I can just do it myself. I complain about it, but I'm content working on this by myself for now.
Still I would rather come up with this all on my own. It's a lot more satisfying even if it is a lot of work. If I can get more people in my crew though, they can work on the smaller things like making the routes/towns/cities/etc and making the lists for items and pokemon. If I can get at least 5 people that I can trust in my crew that would take a load off my shoulders right now even.
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If you want to be part of the Elite Four I'll have to be a little bit tough on you since I don't really know you to well, okay? It's nothing personal I just want everyone to be able to have a good time. This is just advice on grammar.
(advice below)
When your typing be sure the sentence makes sense. To many commas can be bad. Make sure you know where to end a sentence and where to begin another, like in the second sentence of the first paragraph. Instead of writing it like that, write it like this.
tab" This will be his first time in the Kanto region. He has already thought of what Pokemon he will catch and what place he will go to first, in his mind."
When you use to many commas it can make the whole paragraph look a little strange. When you see a comma in a sentence you pause for just a little moment similar to what you do when reading a period, but the sentence keeps on going. Unless it's a list of things (like sweet, sour, bitter, etc) it's not that good to use a lot of commas unless you're listing something.
I have a link to a role-playing guide on Gaia in the rules. Read it when you can because it's really detailed X3 Even I use it when I can't figure out the right grammar to use in a paragraph. My grammar isn't perfect, but when a sentence doesn't make to much sense I know that something is a a little wrong at the very least.
I see a few more places in your RP sample that can use some tweaking, but if you promise to at least look at the guide I'll approve you to join the guild and be an Elite Four alrighty?
tab" This will be his first time in the Kanto region. He has already thought of what Pokemon he will catch and what place he will go to first, in his mind."
When you use to many commas it can make the whole paragraph look a little strange. When you see a comma in a sentence you pause for just a little moment similar to what you do when reading a period, but the sentence keeps on going. Unless it's a list of things (like sweet, sour, bitter, etc) it's not that good to use a lot of commas unless you're listing something.
I have a link to a role-playing guide on Gaia in the rules. Read it when you can because it's really detailed X3 Even I use it when I can't figure out the right grammar to use in a paragraph. My grammar isn't perfect, but when a sentence doesn't make to much sense I know that something is a a little wrong at the very least.
I see a few more places in your RP sample that can use some tweaking, but if you promise to at least look at the guide I'll approve you to join the guild and be an Elite Four alrighty?
Click the join button on the homepage of the guild please and thank you~ You don't have to send the application again since you posted it here.
amarzyciel
