The Sanatorium Jacket - opinions wanted

Which do you prefer?

Bolero with corset	67.5%	[ 56 ]
Just bolero	32.5%	[ 27 ]
Total Votes:			[ 83 ]

[Whimsy Wren]

This is my work in progress for the Halloween contest! Steal my idea and you will wish you hadn't...

Anyways, this is what I have so far:

The one above is sort of what I had before, except I edited the male pose. This one is a work in progress, but thoughts?

The one above has the corset taken out so it is just a bolero style straightjacket.

[Hmni]

want one!

[Whimsy Wren]

bump

[Lady Lagomorph]

I like it, but I'm not quite sure how the front fits. I see what looks like a corset, and then some sleeves with a sort of mock turtleneck. They don't look connected in the front, since there's a line above the fitted torso that makes it look like the sleeves fit sort of high-bolero-style. Are they connected to the torso part? Where? Since the jacket and the base model are both white, I can't tell. Maybe copy and paste one of the models over to the free space on the right and put some skin tone on the body so we can tell better, or paste in some other artwork regarding how it looks.

[Whimsy Wren]

Lady Lagomorph

I like it, but I'm not quite sure how the front fits. I see what looks like a corset, and then some sleeves with a sort of mock turtleneck. They don't look connected in the front, since there's a line above the fitted torso that makes it look like the sleeves fit sort of high-bolero-style. Are they connected to the torso part? Where? Since the jacket and the base model are both white, I can't tell. Maybe copy and paste one of the models over to the free space on the right and put some skin tone on the body so we can tell better, or paste in some other artwork regarding how it looks.

It's supposed to be a corset top with an attached bolero pseudo-straight jacket. I should probably add that into the description XD Thanks for the feedback!

[Whimsy Wren]

Bump!

[Call Me Nefret]

She's a lady.

I would love to have just the boleros.
But I'm a bolero fanatic.

And ladies shouldn't be messed with.

[Treideciem]

way too cute <3 asylum biased items!!! I love it so much

[Yorugami]

I love the sleeves but having the lace and the big
bow in the front just lost it for me. : /
I wish it was a more guy friendly design is all.

[Whimsy Wren]

Yorugami

I love the sleeves but having the lace and the big
bow in the front just lost it for me. : /
I wish it was a more guy friendly design is all.

Thanks for the feedback! I'll edit it and see what I come up with ^-^

[beatngu_ecchi]

I like it.

Maybe there should be a black one with red straps as well

[Yorugami]

Whimsy Wren

Yorugami

I love the sleeves but having the lace and the big
bow in the front just lost it for me. : /
I wish it was a more guy friendly design is all.

Thanks for the feedback! I'll edit it and see what I come up with ^-^

Maybe more chains/belts without a bustier version for the guys? ;D
Like this?

Because I seriously love your idea and we need more straight jackets here on Gaia..
just wish it was more gender neutral for us guys who don't want lace or ruffles.

[Whimsy Wren]

Yorugami

Whimsy Wren

Yorugami

I love the sleeves but having the lace and the big
bow in the front just lost it for me. : /
I wish it was a more guy friendly design is all.

Thanks for the feedback! I'll edit it and see what I come up with ^-^

Maybe more chains/belts without a bustier version for the guys? ;D
Like this?

Because I seriously love your idea and we need more straight jackets here on Gaia..
just wish it was more gender neutral for us guys who don't want lace or ruffles.

I'll try to work something out... I only have MS Paint to work with and I'm not that great with using it. >.<

[Yorugami]

Whimsy Wren

I'll try to work something out... I only have MS Paint to work with and I'm not that great with using it. >.<

For MSPaint it's awesome OvO
Just add the sleeve belts/buckles on the chest area for the guys
instead of the bow and the ruffles XD I think it's fine.

[Whimsy Wren]

Yorugami

Whimsy Wren

I'll try to work something out... I only have MS Paint to work with and I'm not that great with using it. >.<

For MSPaint it's awesome OvO
Just add the sleeve belts/buckles on the chest area for the guys
instead of the bow and the ruffles XD I think it's fine.

I got lucky that it turned out so well XD