anna_cracker
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- Posted: Thu, 30 Jan 2014 21:32:24 +0000
This is a request for critique for my recent webcomic, Ru. The first chapter is now up, and I thought it would be a good time to ask my fellow gaians for some feedback. I'm looking really for anything you have to say about the art, writing, paneling, fonts, website, etc. I'm currently working on chapter two, and would love to keep pushing my work to be the best it can. Don't be afraid to point out things that might seem naggy, or be upfront about things. I generally have a thick skin and can handle tough feedback. emotion_dowant
Here's the description of the comic:
Thanks in advance!
Here's the description of the comic:
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The Siel solar system is at war, a bloody battle rages across the planets for natural resources. Seeking a new life, refugees left Siel for the stars, and eventually found the planet Elealeh. The planet, inhabited by a strange people, accepted the refugees into their fast-paced society. This story follows an Elealehian named Ru, who found herself in love with a Sielian refugee and her life forever changed by him and his family.
Ru is a story about unlikely love, loyalty, sacrifice, and war amidst the stars.
This comic is PG-13. It contains language, nudity and violence suited for an audience 13 and up.
//Updates Mon & Fri //
Ru is a story about unlikely love, loyalty, sacrifice, and war amidst the stars.
This comic is PG-13. It contains language, nudity and violence suited for an audience 13 and up.
//Updates Mon & Fri //
If you have a comic you would like reviewed in turn, I'd be happy to trade critique! Be sure to post a link here and I'll try my best.
Thanks in advance!