Your style is very cute! Your staging is clear and easy to read, and the linework is clean.
The only thing that is a major weak point, is the lettering.
Try to keep text from touching the edges of the word bubbles and the size of the text relatively consistent. Many artists tend to lean towards digital lettering, but
some people hand-letter their work too
I would recommend to put all your word bubbles/narrations inside or outside the panels. The way you have them laid out — where it starts off inside a panel, then suddenly jumps outside to the bottom, to being pushed to the right — gets a bit confusing :<
Your second page flows oddly too, since the panels are laid out to be read vertically while everything else is read horizontally.
There's not much else, as the art and the story is super cute and appealing :3 Maybe you can make small ashcans and sell them at cons?
