Faraam Knight
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- Posted: Mon, 26 Jan 2015 23:52:17 +0000
Alexandra Tepes
The Covenant Man
Alexandra Tepes
The Covenant Man
Alexandra Tepes
you haven't described the deaths, or that the defenses did anything at all -,- but it doesn't matter now you are already going to win, though you will be suffering losses from this last ditch maneuver, Yami was just buying time so his forces could retreat, he obviously isn't worried about the oozes since well killing them with out magic is a twisted b***h, they make great distractions.
Then there it is. Please don't insult me, I don't appreciate it whatsoever.
Yes, and I'm doing my best to be absolutely polite under the pretense that I would receive the same in return. My mother always did repeat the age old saying "Treat others how you'd like to be treated."
I'm afraid that if I were to voice my own opinion nothing good would come of it. I would rather use logic and reason.
I may as well tell my own opinion then.
I asked you to simply roll the Gaia dice irregardless of whether I won or not. I don't give two shits if I won or not. That's obvious at this point. Hell, I'd have worked with this if I lost. But you MUST follow the rules stated. You keep saying that I won as if that's supposed to shut me up because you did me a favor.
Let me tell you something.
In all of my years of roleplaying here I have never run into someone whose grasp on the English language was so bare-bones that I actually questioned whether you were cursed with the immaturity of a seven year old. From the way you are acting, like a petulant child, I see that I haven't been too far off.
Your writing lacks any sort of imagination. It's really just a list of things happening in a sequence. There is virtually no nuance in any word that you've used. In fact, I can fairly state that a story I wrote in the fifth grade had a better grasp on story telling than what you've written.
You have no idea how to use a ******** comma.
I understand that this roleplay doesn't demand perfect grammar or spelling and what-not but I expect that someone would want to put their best foot forward.
I'm not the only person here who has been confused by your writing. Each time I read it, I'm forced to trudge through that compost heap of words that you've taped together to form bare sentences.
I'd understand if you delivered short posts because the other person you were writing with didn't give you enough to work with, but I gave you at least five paragraphs a post and you didn't even give me four in return. Keep in mind, I said least. And those paragraphs barely counted as such, they were three run-on sentences put together and then spaced. Your descriptions are elementary at best and at worst illegible, that is why I have no idea what you're doing.
Sure, I didn't state that my soldiers were dying but neither did you. You had full reign there, given the opportunity to do whatever you wished to them because they were NPCs. Instead you complain.
So really, in all honesty, just stop. You have no reason to complain and whine. If you had simply rolled a dice, something that would take only thirty seconds of your time, we wouldn't be here. Even then, whatever action your character did, you could have easily stated that your character was retreating and the fight was lost.
