Welllllllllll

[DeadTiired]

I drew two things on pencil and paper.

NO. I'm not gonna color them. emotion_donotwant
Feel like i'll ruin them if I do.

I need opinions on how to improve.
I know there is some errors, but not sure.

Kinda wish I had a drawing tablet. sweatdrop

Viper

Freak Pony

[DeadTiired]

Bump

[Kairanha]

You learn more from messing up than getting things right in art. 3nodding
If you want to preserve the original just make a photocopy of it and color that.

[Lychee Fruit]

If you've got printer paper in your house, use that instead of notebook paper. You don't necessarily need fancy paper to sketch on, especially when you're using a No. 2 pencil and doing lineart only, but you DO need paper without blue and pink lines spread across it. At best the lines are a distraction, at worst they become a crutch.