Name: Danni

age: 17

birthday: December 15
Twilight in a Nutshell:

I had the miserable experience of reading Twilight. I knew it was going to be crappy, but I thought it would be a guilty pleasure kind of crappy - where you know it's bad but you still get enjoyment out of it. I actually managed to power through around 400 pages until I gave up. I've been seeing Twilight everywhere lately, especially with Vampire Teens II- I mean New Moon's release, so I thought I'd break down why chicks go apeshit for it.

First off, the author creates a main character which is an empty shell. Her appearance isn't described in detail; that way, any female can slip into it and easily fantasize about being this person. I read 400 pages of that book and barely had any idea of what the main character looked like; as far as I was concerned she was a giant Lego brick.

Appearance aside, her personality is portrayed as insecure, fumbling, and awkward - a combination anyone who ever went through puberty can relate to. By creating this "empty shell," the character becomes less of a person and more of something a female reader can put on and wear. Because I forgot her name (I think it was Barbara or Brando or something like that), I'm going to refer to her as "Pants" from here on out.

So after a few chapters of listening to Pants whine about high school, sucking at volleyball, and being the center of attention, the second major character is introduced. Imagine everything women want in a man, then exaggerate it by ten thousand - and you've got Edward Cullen.

The level of detail that the author goes into while describing Edward's appearance is remarkable. At one point while reading I started counting the number of times the author used the expression "Edward's perfect face," and it was far into the double digits. The author excruciatingly details his muscular pecs, clothing, hair, eye color - even his goddamn breath (I'm not joking).

Edward intensely listens to everything Pants has to say, even if she's bitching about she had diarrhea on Christmas or her preferred method for cutting a sandwich in half. As far as the reader is concerned, Edward cares about nothing in the world more than Pants. What the author has done is created a perfect male figure - a pale Greek statue which the reader can worship and in turn be worshipped by.

Beyond that, it's just a romance novel with the occasional vampire teen drama bullshit peppered here and there. It doesn't really break any new ground in the realm of vampire fiction, other than portraying vampires as a family of uncomfortable retards who prance around the woods eating deer and bunny rabbits.

There's lots of nervous lip-biting, tender kisses between Pants and Edward, and lengthy descriptions of every feature of Edward's body. Pants is a static character who never really progresses beyond being an insecure vampire fangirl who obsesses over Edward. Whether her character grows beyond that is unknown to me, I'd stopped reading by then.


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Report | 12/15/2010 1:47 pm


o 3o happy bday (?)

Report | 06/21/2010 11:12 pm


hey, i know u don't know me in rl (atleast idk if u do but idk u idt that i do tho) but i do like twilight but wat u said does make sense, but i was wondering if u'd like to be friends?

Report | 02/16/2010 7:14 pm


ahh yes i do 8D addz meeee


Report | 02/16/2010 7:08 pm


hahahaha xDD

so yeahhhhh wuts up > u > me likes ur profile seƱorita

Report | 02/16/2010 7:00 pm


yoh yoh yoh yoh chikaaa 8D

Report | 07/14/2009 2:15 pm


I'll probably volunteering most of the con

Report | 07/13/2009 2:44 pm


Yeah, I'm volunteering so I'll be there

Report | 07/13/2009 1:21 am


I don't remeber his last name
There were only 2 Gabes, right?

Report | 07/12/2009 3:50 pm


That Gabe guy from St Rose.
The one that left in 3rd grade not the annoying one that always got in trouble

Report | 07/11/2009 11:30 pm


The 27th (day after comic con)

Guess who I saw at band camp! xD


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