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Report | 09/14/2014 11:28 pm

do not hasten my youth

~50 min. later..

Gwen flinched with pain as the nurse took off the tubes from her wrists. Gwen looked at Peter, "My scholarship at Oxford, Petey?". Peter looked at Gwen, "You have at least 3 months left till Oxford. Good thing you came back... I love you Gwendy.", then Peter held her hand and kissed it. Gwen looked at the huge window overlooking New York's Square, "I love you too Peter. I love you...". MJ ran to Gwen and hugged her, "Enough with the DRAMAAAA! Where we eatin' later? My pay. And we could redo your hair too.", MJ said twirling hr hair.

Report | 09/14/2014 1:30 am

do not hasten my youth

~MJ screamed and hugged Gwen as well, "Oh my god! Oh my god! Call the doctor! Oh my gooodd!". Liz walked over to Gwen and smiled, "You've been through hell, kiddo'.". Peter smiled at Liz and kissed Gwen on the lips, "I missed you... Don't go on trains anymore w/ masked men, okay?". Gwen laughed and kissed him back, "Call Jonathan. He saved me right before the fall... Just let him know.".

Report | 09/14/2014 12:04 am

do not hasten my youth

~"Peter?"

Peter awakes straight away and looks at his beloved, Gwen. He goes over her almost knocking off her monitor and hugs her, "You're awake! I can't believe it!"

Report | 09/13/2014 11:29 pm

do not hasten my youth

~Beep... Beep... Beep...

The sound of the machine went on and on, a tired Peter Parker is seen sleeping beside his girlfriend, Gwen Stacy. MJ is on the couch, talking with Liz Allen, Peter's former classmate and ex-girlfriend, "She wasn't suposed to be there MJ. Don't blame yourself.". "If I told her not to do anything... She still wouldn't be... " MJ looked at Gwen, wounds healed but still in a coma. Just then the monitor stopped.


Gwen opened her eyes.*were in ny now

Report | 09/13/2014 11:07 pm

do not hasten my youth

~Spider Man took Jonathan aside and put Gwen's body in his arms. Spider Man checked Gwen's wrist and neck, and he could only feel a faint pulse. She was alive but she needed immediate medical attention. Just then a S.W.A.T. emerged from the roof along with MJ who ran beside Jonathan and started crying. Spider Man turned and embraced Gwen tightly and took her w/ him as he released a web towards a building. Then they both disappeared.

*6 months later. (BTE, we're still in England, near Oxford.)

Report | 09/13/2014 10:54 pm

do not hasten my youth

~"Let you go?" the red mercenary said, "Okay."

"No!" Gwen yelps as the mercenary loosens his grip and drops her 50 ft. into the air unto the train.

The Red Man, Spider Man, appears out of nowhere and releases his web to catch the falling Gwen from her impending doom. But her fall is too fast, and the web can't reach her in time.

Report | 09/13/2014 10:33 pm

do not hasten my youth

~"Let me go! Who the hell are you!?" Gwen shouted at the masked mercenary kicking him and punching him but that did no effect. The mercenary looked at her and made no effort to answer. He pulled her in an embrace and teleported up in the sky.

(this is a reference to the night gwen stacy died which will happen soon.)

Report | 09/13/2014 10:06 pm

do not hasten my youth

~Gwen stand up and walks closer to the hand, "What the?". The hand yanks her up on the roof, "s**t!", MJ shoots at the roof but a grenade is thrown throwing her to the wall making her faint.

"HELP!"

Report | 09/13/2014 9:37 pm

do not hasten my youth

~"Don't worry Jonathan. I treated my father's gunshot wound before. I think I can do it again. Plus I ace at biochemistry, I know what I'm doing." Gwen replied looking back, "Did you see that MJ?". Mary Jane still staring at Jonathan startled, "Wait. What?". Gwen sighed and noticed the Red Man swinging closer & closer. Just then a thump is felt on the train's roof. A hand pops in.

*i was planning on putting deadshot as the captain or something. Will you do the honors?

Report | 09/13/2014 5:57 am

do not hasten my youth

~"So? How are we going to get out of here?" MJ asks Jonathan eye-ing him, admiring his ... (You know what MJ means.) Gwen hands MJ her shotgun and runs over to the dying thug, "He is not dead though. Don't. I don't want to kill anyone or something.". Gwen yanks Jonathan shirt off, "You won't be needing it anyway.". Gwen then puts the piece of cloth over the bandit's wound and compresses it, she checks his breathing rate, "He's fine. But he'll need medication. A hospital, rather.". Gwen looks over the train's stations window, noticing a red man swinging over buildings, closer & closer.







"Spider Man."

Report | 09/13/2014 5:25 am

do not hasten my youth

~"Face it Tiger, you just hit the jackpot!"

"Oh my god! I thought you were dead!" Gwen dropped her shotgun and hugged the foxy red girl, MJ Watson. "Are they dead?" Gwen asked, "I took them all out.". "But how?" Gwen replies shocked, "Pepper Spray.". Gwen laughed and took MJ in locking the door, "The Civilians?". "Alive. What happened here?" MJ asked, "No wait, I'm fine. Who is this?"

Report | 09/13/2014 5:15 am

do not hasten my youth

~"Mary Jane Watson. A model from New York, and apparently she was found." Gwen shouted running towards the train sections door when it opened.










"MJ?"

Report | 09/13/2014 5:10 am

do not hasten my youth

~Gwen points out the man dying behind him, "He almost broke your neck.". Gwen frowns, "I can't believe this the first time I killed someone. If I didn't ride the train and took the cab instead.. I wouldn't be in this mess.". Just then a scream is heard two sections back, "MJ!"

Report | 09/13/2014 4:50 am

do not hasten my youth

~Gwen pulls the trigger, A shot is heard.

Report | 09/13/2014 4:33 am

do not hasten my youth

~"Wait what?" Gwen turns around, "Agh! What the hell, Jonathan?". Gwen rubs her head and grabs the shotgun, "Now or never? This is so unlike me.". Gwen cocks the gun and readies her weapon.

Report | 09/13/2014 4:22 am

do not hasten my youth

~"Sheesh..." Gwen mutters and nods, "Stay safe.". Gwen then hides behind a passenger's dead body.

Report | 09/13/2014 4:12 am

do not hasten my youth

~"I can take a hit. I'm the daughter of George Stacy. What did you expect?" Gwen replied, "In there!". Gwen grabbed Jonathan and yanked him towards another train section locking the door. Gunshots are heard. "What do we do now?" Gwen asks.

Report | 09/13/2014 3:45 am

do not hasten my youth

~"You bloody hell wanker hit me! From such a beautiful lady... c'mere!" One of the Hostage Taker's thugs yelled, running towards Gwen. "Oh my god!" Gwen pulls the triggers of the small revolver, hitting the thug on the shoulder. The thug slaps the revolver away taking in the pain of the gunshot and hit's Gwen in the stomach. "a*****e!" Gwen screams kicking him in the groin "Let's go Jonathan!"

*Gwen's Version is based on Ultimate Gwen Stacy as well.

Report | 09/13/2014 3:35 am

do not hasten my youth

*train section

Report | 09/13/2014 3:33 am

do not hasten my youth

~"What the hell am I doing?"

"What the?" Gwen yells at the peculiar man "Jonathan!? Why are you here? You're gonna get killed in here! Come with me!". Gwen grabs Jonathan's arm and yanks him down further into the train station.

"Hands up assholes!" A voice shouts behind them. Gwen looks at Jonathan...

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