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Report | 12/03/2009 8:22 pm

Dean Wnchester

that's wat i ment XD
urge......
I should start doing the homework now.....

Report | 12/03/2009 8:14 pm

Dean Wnchester

partnership is just working with each other.
I was planning to make care come after partnership cuz i had this scene of itachi getting injured on a mission and
kisame actually REALIZING he cares. the collect isn't based on the actual feelings, but when they realize those feelings...
ya get my drift?

Report | 12/03/2009 8:05 pm

Dean Wnchester

*shrugs*
i dunno. i just ike reading about all of these bizarre people *0*

Report | 12/03/2009 8:00 pm

Dean Wnchester

it be okay?

Report | 12/03/2009 7:10 pm

Dean Wnchester

pein assigns kisame a a new partner.
kisame's slightly pissed. itachi is still stoic.
not a great start.
cause i want to work the collection of being
hatred, less hatred, tolerance, care, partnership, friendship, 'i think ur hawt', to 'i might actually be in love with you', to 'i admit it, i do love you', 'we'll still love each other after death'
so....holy s**t. the thing i showed you was number 7. O___o
hey. their relationship gets pretty developed for a 12 year relationship.....
that's more than half of itachi's life gonk

Report | 12/03/2009 6:51 pm

Dean Wnchester

X3
told ya it wasn't edited yet.
urge...................
now that i've got the basic idea for kisaita, i need write the first memory of the collection....
the one i showed you was the third or fourth gonk
NEED TO THINK OF THE FIRST!!!!!

Report | 12/03/2009 6:38 pm

Dean Wnchester

careful sweetie. it's not edited yet.....X3

Us

There once was a time where all humans were free
Now mankind is but equality

We thirst for fame and lust and power
But soon our desires will get us devoured

Our hearts only crave what we can’t obtain
The obsession with demands nearly insane

We build our trust on merely words
Our reason and faith solely absurd

We have assurance on only indefinite opinions
Our focus so limited, believing in the oblivion

Confident and bold we stand forsaken
Our ability to reason is forever taken

Our choices reckless, our decision erratic
Turning our surroundings completely hectic

We learn naught form our past mistakes
For our memories will forever remain faint

Humans so fragile, we will never get far
By the slightest impact we are easily scarred

Soon we will drown in our hatred and greed
And haunting us will be our sinful deeds

But there are still few that aren’t so vial
That can rescue us all from the upcoming trial

The few that still care for humanity
Those whose hearts are filled with sanity

Out of the cluster there is only a few
But don’t give up hope, one of them maybe you

Report | 12/03/2009 6:27 pm

Dean Wnchester

yar ne?
wanna read a poem i wrote a while ago?

Report | 12/03/2009 4:42 am

Dean Wnchester

a collection of memories leading up to there last night together.
10 stories maybe? there's two before this one.
the collection's gonna be called 'Lost Memories'
sounds okay?

Report | 12/02/2009 9:28 pm

lala-song24

xD
you know it.

Report | 12/02/2009 9:01 pm

Dean Wnchester

help me think of some rants?
no wait! I've just been struck by a brilliant ideal.
itachi is in a one-sided love thing for kisame.
kisame 'provokes' him again and he totally breaks down and rants on how
kisame is always being mean to him and how his feelings would never be returned
and kisame just cuts in and itachi kinda continues then stops at mid sentence and le awkward silence again.
WHAM.

then.....that's all i got O___o

Report | 12/02/2009 8:49 pm

Dean Wnchester

the not loving one sounds good.
but kisame's feelings are too open for that.
or there can be annoy itachi kicks kisame out of room then fluffy make up.
or...idk. something fluffy.
cuz i was planning to put somewhere in there a scene where itachi's stoic mask totally cracks and he starts ranting and goes on and on about how much it sucks to be him
and kisame cuts him off by saying i think ur hot. all casually .and he keeps ranting and then it's sort of just.
wait. what?! *slaps*

Report | 12/02/2009 8:37 pm

Dean Wnchester

yay!!!
so i'm improving? *squeel*
eh. when i finish the draft you can do edit and jessie can do second edit.
the awkward silence is good.
but what comes after?
but first. we need a conflict.
think think think.

Report | 12/02/2009 8:30 pm

Dean Wnchester

wtf?
lol song XO

Report | 12/02/2009 8:22 pm

Dean Wnchester

the other one ran away.
but this is what i have so far on this one.
of course it's kisaita and oh.
plz don't be so cruel to me. i don't write all that much O___o

The two s-ranked criminal were on the floor of the room they shared, one leisurely watching the rain while crouching next to the other, who was deeply focused on writing some sort of document. Eyes squinting to see in the dark, for the only light sources were but that of a few shrinking candles. “Itachi…” Kisame whispered nudging lightly at his partner’s ribs.

“Hn.” He replied, swatting the other man’s elbow.

“Guess what.” The shark continued, taking a lock of the raven hair and twirling it.

“Hn?”

“The rain…is wet.” He stated in a tone of pure bewilderment.

WHAM.

“GYA!!! Ow! The fu--? What was that for?!” the man fought to scramble to his feet before being hit again. He stared down at the weasel who was currently sprawled across the floor of their bedroom engrossed in a mission report. “Why’d you have to so mean? C’mon it’s the holidays!”

“It’s August.” Itachi retorted in monotone, shifting his weight to his left arm while continuing to write, his gaze never once leaving the parchment that laid in front of him. Kisame gave him a flat look and slumped down next to his partner, dismissing the thought of the dangers of another violent attack. He draped his arm across the smaller man’s shoulder. The writing slowed and Itachi stiffened. “What are you doing?”

“Nothing.” he muttered while placing his chin on top of the weasel’s head. The writing stopped all together. Itachi glared at the scrolls before him and let out a sigh of annoyance.

“ Get. Off. ”, the younger male commanded through gritted teeth, “ Kisame-kun” hissing the last syllable and turning his glare upwards to where the shark quickly retracted his arms and chin. The blue man quickly mumbled an apology while slowly scooting to a safe range from the angry sadist. Our Uchiha prodigy resumes to writing while keeping a watchful eye at the shark man, swearing in his mind to incinerate the man if he tries to come close again.

any ideas for how to continue it?

Report | 12/02/2009 8:19 pm

Dean Wnchester

rawr.

Report | 12/02/2009 8:09 pm

lala-song24

umm, i'll listen to it later--- family's in da room.


OH LOOK, DINNER'S READY. BRB. -scurries away fairly quickly-

Report | 12/02/2009 8:05 pm

lala-song24

i'm afraid to click.... gonk

Report | 12/02/2009 8:02 pm

lala-song24

LOL, same here. it plays in my head.

NOBODY'S PERFECT, I GOTTA WORK IT. AGAIN AND AGAIN 'TIL I GET IT RIGHT.

Report | 12/02/2009 7:54 pm

lala-song24

exactly. 4laugh
+ , you just need practice. cause... NOBODY'S PERFECT.

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