About me... aah What the heck, its just a lame story!!!

Daren ran down the street, passing a girl as he turned a corner. He had to go, get away, anywhere but here. As he passed the girl he felt a tug on his sleeve, but he kept running, then stopped to look back. The girl had on a long, loose-sleeved purple shirt, shivering in the puring rain, and dark purple pants. Her hair was up in a messy ponytail, and her eyes were... strangely purple with some black mixed in. She was staring straight at him, her hand still outstretched from when she grabbed his sleeve. Then she asked Daren, "Where are you going?" He told her, "Anywhere. Leave me alone." His cold, grey, empty eyes flashed bright yellow, their true color.




I am still working on it, but what do you think so far?