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Report | 02/27/2010 6:05 pm

styledcliff

that sounds annoying

Report | 02/27/2010 5:57 pm

styledcliff

im sure it could have been way worse

Report | 02/27/2010 5:25 pm

styledcliff

win?

Report | 02/27/2010 5:17 pm

styledcliff

how are you?

Report | 02/27/2010 3:53 pm

styledcliff

im pretty good and thank you ^^

Report | 02/25/2010 6:00 pm

Aerith Kitsune

>W<;;; Aww... Nah, not really. I do a bit of poetry, if you maybe want to see?

So, are you gonna maybe add those lines in or nah?

Report | 02/25/2010 5:57 pm

Aerith Kitsune

Woah, I deffinately like this! May I add onto it?

Taking off at a run,
The soldier raises his gun.
Bang, bang.
The noise continues in the hell,
Soldiers sound it off like a bell.
Bang, bang.
More fall under the onslaught,
Grenades are thrown and caught.
Bang, bang.
The soldier dives into a trench,
Doing his best to ignore the stench.
Bang, bang.
Nearby an explosion erupts,
Planes fly overhead uncorrupt.
Bang, bang.
The noise begins to lower,
The battle is almost over.
Bang, bang.
The soldier looks down at his chest,
Red spills to make a crest.
Bang, bang.

Above: Yours.
Below: Mine, adding on.

A ruby sign of things to be
how life runs and the misery
that goes along with war and pain
and knowing after this there isn't much to gain
bang bang <-- ?

the bodies will constantly litter the floor
all those souls becoming no more
bang bang

[ their existance has ended
and this fight has suspended
suspended itself into the skies
where the planes fly high and improvize
loop and twist and shoot and miss
blazing fire balls crashing and kiss
kiss the earth and and soil below
because the fighting is everywhere
just watch it grow] <--- this part kinda sounds funky to me but here

Report | 02/25/2010 5:33 pm

Aerith Kitsune

owo Have you gotten an idea for what exactly you want to write about or do you need some ideas thrown your way?

Report | 02/25/2010 5:04 pm

Aerith Kitsune

^^ What are the poem's topics about?

Report | 02/25/2010 4:59 pm

Aerith Kitsune

^^ That's fine and I'm well too. Oh, poetry? ^^ I'd like to hear the finished one maybe, when you're able?

Report | 02/24/2010 8:48 pm

Blond_Sakura

here's a sneaky idea: take a topic from another poem that you know, and write a different poem on the same topic.

: D

Report | 02/24/2010 8:15 pm

Blond_Sakura

gonk
I could never write that much poetry. I'd slash my wrists.
I can occasionaly crap out a decent poem, but I'm more of a
...story person.

Report | 02/24/2010 8:10 pm

Blond_Sakura

all is good, all is good. just finished writing a 2k scholarship essay. And i'm going on a 'music retreat' band trip! and my art shop should be open soon ^^ And I just got my OC art!!

it's a good day.

Report | 02/23/2010 8:18 pm

Aerith Kitsune

Boo! ^^ Hi Shock, doing well?

Report | 02/14/2010 1:27 am

Daeli

THE OLYMPICS BE IN A PLACE THAT DOSENT EXISTTTT

THE TV LIEEEEEEE

Hello. :3 How're yoooooooooo.

-Twitch-

Report | 02/13/2010 10:54 pm

Aerith Kitsune

Ouch. >_o Swimmers ear? I've gotten that before. If it's just an ear infection though it doesn't sound as serious as the flu, thankfully. o.O I actualy hadn't even realised the Olympics were running already.

Report | 02/13/2010 10:28 pm

Aerith Kitsune

@_@ Oh dear! Sick with what? You gonna be alright? =P I'm not really an Olympics person.

Report | 02/13/2010 10:18 pm

Aerith Kitsune

I'm doing well, happy, have a new art program, made up with my friend and talked with one I hadn't heard from in a while. What about you? How's life treating you?

Report | 02/13/2010 10:08 pm

Aerith Kitsune

^^ Hiii Shock.

Report | 01/31/2010 3:31 pm

Aerith Kitsune

^^ Glad you're doing well and here: http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/series-related-miscellaneous-role-play/legend-of-zelda-the-final-legend-open-and-accepting/t.58242351_91/?sequence=91

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