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WELCOME TO BODY CRUSHER ENTERPRISES

Hi my name is Christopher Holl. About 2 years ago I took a break from Gaia before I left i gave all my stuff away to other Gaia members in a contest forum that i ran. now I'm back to tell you about our Online story Body Crusher Enterprises. Maxx a friend of mine and I are writing this story and we post it up chapter by chapter. This is a science fiction action story set in the year 2016. The story takes place in Exeter, Rode Island, and focuses on a young male named Trigger. If you want to read the story visit our web site at. http://bodycrusherenterprises.net

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This story takes place in the year 2016. The world is not much different then ours now just a few new pieces of technology here and there. The main character of the story is Trigger, a 17 year old male who live in Exeter, Rode Island.

At first he lives a normal life with a mother, father and older sister. He has two friends he spends most of his time at school with. One day at school Trigger is outside during a free period and he sees a strange man in a red and black hooded trench coat. This man Trigger sees is walking a cross a wooden fence. The strange thing about this was that the man walked along the fence like it was solid ground. Trigger asks his friends if they see the man as well, and to his surprise they do not. No one but Trigger sees this man.

His family and school ends up thinking he is a problem child looking for attention so they send him to a creepy therapist who gives him pills that Trigger has never heard of before. These pills make the hooded man cease to appear to him and every thing seems to get progressively better until he is visited by the hooded man one night in his room. The man walks trough the wall into Triggers room and asks Trigger to return to BCE with him. Trigger claims the man is not real and tries to take more pills. The hooded man takes the pill container away and crushes it in his hands.

Then Trigger wakes up to find the pills crushed on the floor. He later walks in on his family having a nice conversation when existence its self shatters around him revealing the horrible scene of the massacre of his family. His parents and sister were torn to pieces in his living room by a man with a digital mask and a large white suit of armor.

If you would like to read more please visit our site. Body Crusher Enterprises

You can also check some of the cool videos and songs made for BCE at Body Crusher Enterprises Youtube page.

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DzeTriEdge

Report | 09/10/2012 12:32 pm

DzeTriEdge

accepted
DzeTriEdge

Report | 09/10/2012 12:26 pm

DzeTriEdge

do you want to trade your zodiacal for my Dashing Gentleman Blue Tuxedo Trousers ?
yummycupcakessparkles

Report | 05/04/2011 8:49 pm

yummycupcakessparkles

Happy Birthday
ryruko

Report | 02/14/2011 9:01 pm

ryruko

Wow, thank you so much! I actually came up with quite a bit so far, when I get the chance I will tell you, and see what you think.
Well the first drawings should be done by tomorow or wednesday and I will send them to you then.
Thanks again 3nodding
ryruko

Report | 02/14/2011 11:08 am

ryruko

Hey I was wondering if you might be ok with me making a manga based on the events of the End of earth RP?
Just an idea, but I do have some pictures I drew of the members, Emery and Claudius are drawn already just not inked.
I will upload them and send you a link when I get the chance.
ryruko

Report | 01/28/2011 10:11 am

ryruko

oops forgot
heres a few pictures I drew over the past months
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if you hit zoom on the first pic it will look better whee
ryruko

Report | 01/28/2011 9:58 am

ryruko

I actually have quite a few stories but none of them are online, I do have some of my artwork displayed at a site calle Manga Circle Online heres the links if you want to take a look,
Oh yeah I also read the first three chapters to BCE, very interesting I can't wait to see what happens, Doctor Allure creeps me out, whee
ryruko

Report | 01/26/2011 8:44 pm

ryruko

I will be sure to, I just read the opening plot but I will definately read more when I get the chance.
I am an amateur sci-fi writer/manga artist myself, its always nice to meet others in that simmilar intrest biggrin
ryruko

Report | 01/26/2011 6:12 pm

ryruko

Hi there, I read a little about your BCE story, sounds really cool I will check it out when I get the chance..
Dogman999

Report | 01/18/2011 1:00 pm

Dogman999

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show. Nice avi!