Ok, so I write songs for my band. I have a great song that I wrote that is about love, and so its really heartfelt. Don't make fun of it, please. Its a work in progress. Josh, if you are on and reading this, its ok to read it. In fact, I would LOVE to know what you think. Ok, here is the song.
Right Now Light as a feather free as a bird you take my breath away with just one word
The world spins 'round my head I'm here in your arms wrapped in a blanket of red
(1 measure intrumental break)
Yesterday is gone to me Right now is all I know Tommorrow is a mystery As today begins to go
(6 measure instrumental break)
The fire is roaring I'm feeling relaxrd My heart is soaring its beating so fast
Head's on your shoulder Your hand's on my hand You're getting bolder You kiss me, we're in a secret land
(1 measure instrumental break)
Yesterday is gone to me Right now is all I know Tommorrow is a mystery As today begins to go
(8 measue instrumental break)
Light as a feather free as a bird You take my breath away with just one word
Alright, if you have any suggestions on the lyrics, please leave a comment. If you like it, please, leave a comment. If you don't, then I don't like you, and don't leave a comment unless it is constructive critisizm.
xXBella_TwilightXx · Mon Jan 14, 2008 @ 02:17am · 3 Comments |