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Nimajin
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heart hi guys heres one of my recent poems i hope you like it! heart



Fire


Binding,twisting
Jumping,Dancing
colors mix as its burning

A mix of blue, red, and orange
Laughing, crackling turning around
casting my shadow
on the ground

i take some water and pour it on...
watching it simmer till the show is done.



this is the dedication to my english teacher..... i'll never see her again thats y i made this poem she reminded me of fire her kindness, happiness and feelings of joy made me so happy






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HotRockinCutie
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comment Commented on: Thu Apr 05, 2007 @ 06:51pm
LUV it! Is Sammy going 2 b on this 2?


comment Commented on: Thu Apr 05, 2007 @ 07:07pm
no fortunatly blaugh xd



Nimajin
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comment Commented on: Thu Apr 05, 2007 @ 07:25pm
heres another poem not by me but by one of my friends who unfortunatly is not on gaia at all but shes crazy werid and unique heres her quote "im unque and you'll never find another person like me, if you do kill them!" yup she said that.


a caged brid

im stuck in a cage
please let me out
i'll go crazy in here
please let me out


won't anyone hear my plea
im a caged brid who misses the sky and fresh air

let me see the sun
open the door so i can run and fly to another where i can be free once more
let me sing a song of joy


her inspiration comes from spring break her parents don't even let her to go out here is wut she said "im bored" well see ya


comment Commented on: Sat Apr 07, 2007 @ 01:31pm
Okay, wow. That's wierd. lol 4laugh He.He.



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AznDS
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comment Commented on: Fri Jul 13, 2007 @ 06:28pm
talkin' bout english teachers, do you remember mr. simmons' e-mail??? i wanted to send him my story and see what he thought about it.
...i miss mrs. o'hara too! crying she made fun of -hic- Matt crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying ninja crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying


comment Commented on: Sat Jul 21, 2007 @ 01:35am
I heart UR POEMS! (and ur drawings) HOPE UR HAVING A GREAT SUMMER! whats ur email again???



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comment Commented on: Sat Jul 21, 2007 @ 01:37am
CAN U LOOK AT MY STORIES! (but only the one(s) about a slave girl AND TELL ME WHAT U THINK OK?! cuz ur the only 1 wo will be honest with me! (( ninja ))


comment Commented on: Wed Aug 08, 2007 @ 07:17pm
Hmmm your "caged bird" sounds like you lol



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