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this will b pure random stuff, i doubt ill write in it much, but ull just hafta find that out 4 urself =P u nvr no... NVR!!!
here comes the boom
A friend of mine once told me, "Boom—Splash—That was it." That's how it felt.

Kristi was down. Then Andrew. [others kept falling] Boom. Splash. Of blood. That was it.

Kristi wasn't even her first name. It was Yamanaka. It was a beautiful name. It still is. I'll honor her by Yamanaka more often.

My friend was describing a roller coaster ride, but— this is definitely the scariest thrill ride I've been on. Damn it, it's not a thrill, it's not a ride. I'm stuck in some deep crap.

[is thinking of Kristi and gets a near miss] Damn it, Kristi. [...]

The narrator's a guy. A bunch of his friends/comrades are killed, characters killed off, very quickly and suddenly. They're just hit by some blast more powerful than a gunshot and then they're dead. And he has to keep going. Kristi is actually the love of his life, and he won't love anyone else like that again. I think their relationship is more developed after her death, in his reminiscence of her. I think I want Kristi to still be important even after her death. She'll be his distraction during times of danger. He'll be thinking of her when something will whiz past hi, almost killing him. Her memory will also keep his strong, cheer him up, not just thinking of her but thinking of what she might say to him, which in effect might be him consoling himself through Kristi's image. She's like a lifeline for him sometimes, even though she almost kills him. This guy's gotta be in despair after Kristi is offed, but he also has to cope with it somewhat quickly, so he doesn't snivel about her for a whole while. And he has to deal with the death of others too. Suddenly these guys aren't there anymore, and they won't be ever again. People who were with him for long and short times, they're gone. He'll be missing something, things good and bad from the different characters, but he has to keep going to survive whatever predicament it is these characters are in.
I imagine some fantasy, supernatural setting. And/or sci-fi, but i wouldn't prefer aliens and space and hi-tech futuristic weapons, although that's sort of the kind of weaponry I'm imagining. And I don't mean fantasy as in, wonderful and exotic. These are human teenagers from Earth being chased by some supernatural enemy, but I don't know what it is, and I don't know if they're on Earth anymore.

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