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OOC: So, this is the first story I'm doing! In honor of Black Friday, to warn those gone shopping how dangerous it is... Let the typing begin!

A long line in front of the mall in the middle of the night. People chatting and watching the door. We know what that means; it's Black Friday. In that line, Very Special Agent Anthony DiNozzo and Special Agent Timothy McGee were waiting in that line along with all of the civilians.

Tony ran his hand through his thinning hair and sighed, "The day after Thanksgiving... Isn't this great, McGamer?"

McGee, staring at the line before looking at Tony, replied, "I knew we should've came earlier... It's not great when it comes to this kind of line..." He added to that line, "I'm just looking for a PC game for my friend, that's all."

Tony shifted his eyes to Tim as he lowered his hand. He grinned, "Ooh! What game is this?"

McGee rolled his eyes and sighed, "Minecraft."

As the line moved, Tony commented to Tim, "Ooh, Tim's getting McMinecraft!"

As the line moved and walked in the mall, there was lots of shoving and pushing. Everyone felt it, including the two agents. "Hey!" Tony yelled as a bundle of people crammed over him. He pushed some people so he could get through with McGee.

When they made it inside about 20 minutes later, there was a huge circle of crowds bowsing the stores. "Okay,", Tony turned to McGee and asked, "Where are we going to find Minecraft?"

McGee looked to Tony, then looked around the mall. He found a Target ahead of them, and he pointed there. "Let's try Target first..."

Tony nodded to him and lead the way there. While he lead, he also pushed some people who were trying to shoplift out of their way. They pushed through the large crowds until they were able to see the red glowing sign that had a bullseye. "Phew! We made it!" Tony sighed before leading the way inside.

Pushing their way in the store, Tim and Tony tried to navigate their way to the PC game section. They ran into a lot of people who wanted to shop for clothing and video games like Modern Warfare 3 (which ran out quite quickly!), and the two agents finally found their way to the aisle.

Tim immediately set eyes on the game. "Found Miecraft!" he smiled to Tony before squeezing his way through the stopped crowd of people and reaching for the game. He grabbed it and held it as tightly as he could before squeezing back through the crowd. His eyes gleamed and he nodded to Tony, "Let's run. Now." He started the route to the cashier, squeezing through the huge crowds and pushing past people.

While they were going through, a hand suddenly grabbed hold of the copy of Minecraft Tim held. "Hey!" Tim yelled, "Let go!" He tried to pull the game closer to him, but the hand attempted to pull it away from him. Both of them tried not to let go of the copy; Tim was pulling towards him and Tony, while the other guy was pulling it towards himself.

Tony stepped in to the situation and yelled, "Alright, alright. Both of you want this, but my friend had it first..."

The guy suddenly yelled, "Hey! Get out of this!" He then pulled harder, pulling McGee and the game with him.

Tim, trying to keep his cool, pulled as hard as he could until the guy finally let go. The guy suddenly proclaimed, "SHOP FIGHT!" He punched McGee's cheek hard.

Tony and McGee, not knowing what to do, tried to calm the guy down. Tony socked the guy in his stomach and said, "What are you trying to do, cause World War 3?!" He then noticed everyone punching one another while police went in and tried separating every fight. Lucky for them, though, the lines were freed because of the fights. They paid quickly and ran out of the store.

"Hey, McBruise, you okay?" Tony, staring at McGee's red cheek, asked him.

McGee softly touched his sore cheek and sighed, "Remind me to never shop on Black Friday again if I want to leave a store without any cracked teeth..." He smiled a bit, trying not to smile too much.

Tony winced a bit and wrapped his arm around Tim's shoulder. "Come on," he said, "Let's go get some ice on your cheek." They both walked far away from the store, not bothering to look back.

At the window of the shop, a teenage girl looked at Tony and McGee as they walked off. She pointed her camera at them before pointing it back to the multiplicity of fights going on inside. She giggled as she recorded, "This is going to get so viral!"