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The Lady Kae
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The boy in the shadows
As the boy walked through the shadows one could almost imagine him heading home after a night out with his friends. Almost. Normally you wouldn't be coming home with blood dripping from your fingers, would you? As he stopped in the light one could see his green eyes glowing from within like poison. While his dirty black hair fell past his shoulders and his vacant stare took in the street he saw his next victim.

The girl was walking quickly, pushing her glasses up with one finger as she answered her cell phone. As she chatted with the person on the other end of the phone she failed to notice that someone was now stalking her with evil intent. Suddenly she saw a shadow fall across her path and she looked back.

With a gasp she dropped the phone and began to run. As she started to turn the corner she felt an arm grab her around the middle and pull her back into the shadows. As he laughed the boy drew her further away from safety, his hand covering her mouth. As she was dragged further down the alley the girl whimpered and prayed. She went still as the boy bent down and licked her throat. With a shiver that was all fear she stood still and hoped he would end it soon. As the fangs were millimeters close to the white flesh the vampire was suddenly flung from his prey.

A man stood in the shadows, slightly in front of the girl who was now laying on the ground. As she panted and watched the two figures launched themselves at on another and began to fight viciously. She could see nothing but shadows and as something warm began to hit her face she closed her eyes and turned her head away. Silence.

And then she could hear her heart beating. Something warm was cleaning her arm. As she lowered it she kept her eyes closed and began to feel a warm tounge licking the blood from her face. She shook with fear until the warmth moved and she cautiously opened her eyes. She looked up into blue eyes and her fear dissipated but only a little. As he grabbed her hands and helped her to stand a dreamy expression crossed her face. She knew him. He had saved her life more then once before. As she threw her arms around him and laid her head on his chest he slowly bent down and kissed her on the neck. As his fangs pierced her skin she shivered, but this time in ecstasy.



((listening too: The Used - The Bird and the Worm ))





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sabretoothlioness
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comment Commented on: Tue Jul 24, 2007 @ 03:02am
What the...?!
...You got more than your share of angst when you were born, i can tell. blaugh
Still, work a little on how smooth the writing sounds and i think we've got something. whee


comment Commented on: Tue Jul 24, 2007 @ 03:52am
As the broken river
winds around my heart,

This was all typed up in about 15 minutes. I wanted to try something they had us do in my school. For a English portfolio we had to do a one page story without using names and I wanted to take it a step further. I decided not to use any dialoge either. And to honest it wasn't written in angst but anger.
I think back to a time
when the world wasn't so black.



The Lady Kae
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