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this is my RP character. feedback, tips, hints etc. would be absolutely awesomee<3:

Taryn Keeghan Moran _.|._ T, Taryn, Tarry, Manny

THiS iS WH0 i AM...
Miss Dark Blue
i'VE EATEN THiS MUCH CAKE...
seventeen
i'M SUCH A...
lady
i LiKE T0 GET WiTH...
straight
i'M S0 iNTERESTiNG...
As you already know I'm Taryn. I'm straight. Guys all the way. My parents died when I was like, what, 10? I've been alone in this cruel cruel world since then. My grandparents have paid for an education and I work to pay rent to stay at my shitty apartment. oh, and by the way, I can be bitchy at times. So if I become a b***h or whatever just ignore me. I tend to be like that. I'm usually pretty nice. I've been called emo before because of what I wear but I'm not. Or at least according to me I'm not. I don't cut or anything but before my parents died in that horrible car crash my dad would get drunk and beat me half to death so I wasn't that sad about him dieing but I do miss my mom at times. One time he tried to drown me. One day I was so terified of him I hid from him. But unfortunately he found me. He dragged me to the bathroom and filled up the tub. He shoved
me under the water and hes really strong. I couldn't get free. I nearly drowned. I guess I hit him in a bad place or something. But he let go. When he did I ran as far away as possible. In the end I got into drinking and parties and smoking,etc. I love to hang out with people and just chill. I always have my cell on me so text or call me whenever you just want someone to talk to. Oh yeah, I also have an older sister who I haven't heard from since I was fourteen. Well thats enough about me.
KEEP iT QUiET...
I'm one of those people that wear black which I always do but I love pink. Shh don't tell!!
i’LL NEVER TELL...
I want to marry a guy that has a lot of money and is a really great guy. not a cheating sleaze
Y0U HANG R0UND ME LiKE A ******** DiSEASE
BabyAngelOfLight

Obviously the reviewer above me really can't comprehend how to interpret the obvious, but it shows in all the inexperienced ones I guess. I think your profile style was effing bitchen man! I've never seen someone do a style like that, and honestly it makes me want to do one myself. I think really nifty and original. I admit that I would have never thought of that way to create a profile. It's....SPEAKLESS. That's how awesome it is.

But back to the content at hand; this is very....flowing. It's easy to understand, there's not much there to the background but there's no need for more since is really comes down to interpreting the obvious.