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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 6:06 pm
 By: Zodiac-Chan Rating: PG-13 Reason: My very colorful language Disclaimer: This goes for all chapters I don’t own anything except for the story plot. Characters: Ryan - 16 Gerard – 24 Mikey – 20 Frank – 19 Ray – 23 Bob – 21
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 6:08 pm
Chapter One
I stood solid looking at the old building that stood eerily in front of me. It was supposed to be the most haunted house in the whole town. Of, course, I lived in one of the smallest towns in the world. Belleville, New Jersey. Yes, it was the home of My Chemical Romance. When I left my little town and I said where I lived, they asked if I have ever met them. Of, course, I haven’t yet. I will say they are my favorite band. I’ve been to multiple concerts for them, and they were absolutely amazing. I think one time, Gerard noticed me. Oh, my. I was rambling again. How did I get into this mess? I asked myself. I HAD to make a deal with those idiots to go into this house. “Well, here I go.” I said to myself, starting to force myself to move. I was really scared let’s say. If I had the chance to run, I would take it, but almost the whole school was watching me. I touched the door knob. It was freezing cold, and it was summer. At least 91 degrees out. I removed my hand from knob almost immediately. “What are you waiting for? Are you going chicken on us?” One of the jocks said, then other one beside the one that just spoke started making chicken noises. I snorted air at them, then I grabbed the door knob and opened the door. I walked into the house and shut the door. I swore I heard gasps from the crowd after I shut the door. I headed up the stairs ready for anything. I stepped on the first steps. They creaked a lot. I mean like every step creaked. After listening to the creaking steps, I walked down the hallway to the nearest bedroom. I brought my stuff with me since they dared me to stay a full week in this house. I felt a presence, but it was vague. I opened one of the closest doors that is my room for the week. I rested on the usually comfortable bed. I opened my bag and pulled out the book Twilight. I knew I was going to have plenty of time, so I brought New Moon, too. I loved Twilight so far. It’s a very good book. As I read, I heard some footsteps on the stairwell. I shut my book and laid it on the bed. I walked out of my room to the stairwell. “Hello? Is someone here?” I said quietly. I touched the wall and hid behind it. I looked over the side to see no one at the stairwell. I walked toward the door. As I was on the stairwell, I swore I heard a faint voice, singing. It was singing. I felt like Christine Daae for a moment. I had a love for the book, The Phantom of the Opera. It gives so much detail. I love reading the original French. I knew a lot of French as you can tell. It was a gothic book. Yes, I looked it up. It was a gothic love story. My bad. I was rambling again. “Hello?” “Why, hello there,” said a voice from afar. It’s sounded like Gerard Way from My Chemical Romance, but I said to myself I must have been dreaming. Then all of a sudden, when I turn around…
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 5:41 am
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 12:18 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 5:28 pm
wow, i really like this! please more!
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 11:57 am
I love it! And I LOOOOVE The Phantom of the Opera!
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 3:43 pm
Chapter Two
Recap:
“Why, hello there,” said a voice from afar. It’s sounded like Gerard Way from My Chemical Romance, but I said to myself I must have been dreaming. Then all of a sudden, when I turn around… End of Recap.
I turn around to see nothing there. It was creepy because it felt like there was someone behind me. I felt tricked. Damn those Jocks. They always pick on the people who like MCR or how ‘bout we say me because I’m the only person in the whole 622 of them who liked MCR. They are my favorite band. But I didn’t care if they made fun of me. I liked MCR and I’m damn proud of it. “Where is she?” I heard someone say next to me. “She’s right next to you.” I turned around again to see nothing. “No, she isn’t.” I turned again. I felt tingly. I don’t know why. Then something touched my back. I was faced the stairwell. I grabbed where my back was touched. Nothing. I was starting to get really scared. “What the ********?! Yes she is. She’s right there. You’ve been staring at her since she walked in, Raymond.” I heard another voice say that sounded exactly like Frank. Most of it sounded like Ray talking. But I know they can’t be here. This whole thing kinda reminded me of Vampies. You know the My Chemical Romance song. So, I accidentally started to hum it. “Dude! She’s singing one of our songs.” I lifted my head and immediately stopped humming. “I’m getting out of here.” I said to myself. “No! Wait!” I didn’t listen to the voice that sounded like Ray. I didn’t care. I was leaving. The crowd moved out and I wanted out of here before I went mad. “No! Please, wait!” I heard Ray’s voice say again
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 3:47 pm
Mooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Please.
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 7:54 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 9:37 am
ATTENTION READERS!!! I'm very deeply sorry, but I must postpond my fanfic because of an very tragic accident. My computer has crash and ALL of my saved files on it. I will be trying to get my computer fixed from my dad. He'll figure it out.My computer sucks, Okay?
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 10:57 am
Ok. My computer is fixed I'll be posting my new chapter shortly.
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 11:42 am
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 2:11 pm
yay, you're computer's fixed! Now...
update! <3
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 3:29 pm
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 2:25 am
Since obviously people like my fanfiction, I'll give you an update. Yay!
Chapter 3
I ran back to my “room” that I was going to use, but I had to get out of here before I went absolutely insane. I ran to it and started to pack my things. I shoved all my items into my duffel-bag. “I gotta get out of here,” I said, shoving my last item in the bag. I grabbed it and headed for the door. But out of nowhere, it shut on me. By itself. I started to think this place was really haunted. “Where are you going? I asked you to wait.” I heard Ray’s voice say. “I want to go home. And why do you sound like Ray Toro from My Chemical Romance?” I asked the voice, “I’m only a ******** senior in high school. Help me out here.” “Because I am Ray Toro.” I heard him whisper in my ear. I was always a really big Ray fan. I couldn’t help it. He was my idol for guitar. I was in shock. I felt hair that was like an afro like Ray’s against my cheek. “Don’t you believe me?” He rested his chin on my shoulder. I felt a little trapped. I didn’t know why either. I could go just as easily as I could stay. It was weird. “I believe you.” A bit. I should say. I didn’t believe him a lot, but a bit I do.
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