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 Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 9:22 am
this picture is a human version of this avi:  this is my picture:  I need help figuring out what is wrong with her body shape, I'm having a hard time with it!
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 9:51 am
Wow!
I admire the fact that you're making her sit instead of standing, since a sitting person is definately harder to draw.
The only things I'd say to keep in mind are that the hands on most humans are around the same size as the face, as are the feet
other than that you're doing a wonderful job for such a difficult pose
good job, hun ^^
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 10:20 am
Well for starters her breasts are a bit too high up and her shoulders are a bit wide. Her upper legs are way too wide and a bit too short i would suggest making the hands bigger along with the feet but otherwise good.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 9:44 am
her hair seems odd to me, it almost looks like a different style of hair
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 10:10 am
make her hands and feet bigger and her upper legs a little thinner. But I think it looks good other than that! Keep working on it and I'm sure it will be perfect! Making them sit down is hard too! So good work!
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 8:49 pm
Make her hands and feet a little larger.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 9:04 pm
proportions proportions proportions!!!!  try having a human model pose for you to help with fine details.
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 5:06 pm
They are right, but a little harsh...I think that you did good for the pose and that with the red lines it would be easier...
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:38 pm
if you have the legs turned at an angle, you need to turn the hips as well.
the hand is waay small.
give the wind a little form.
sholders are kinda broad for a girl.
arms are a bit detatched.
thats all i got, sorry if it sounds harsh.
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:44 pm
here's a kinda half-@$$ redline. sorry for not-in-depthness. 
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:53 pm
ok, heres a better one.... 
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 4:07 pm
ok i got some pointers:
the part on the hair is on the wrong side so thats why it looks different.
the smoke should b puffier...idk if u were gonna edit it ornot
the boobs are way too high up and one is bigger then the other if u didnt notice mrgreen
hands and feet gotta be bigger [better then mine tho....i just do hands that look like idk...gloves with out the thumb biggrin same with the feet.
the shorts look kinda weird, i think they should be more rounded then straight across if you get what im saying.
ok the thigh is way to big [no offence]
thats all i can c :] u did good [trust me when i started drawing people...lets just say ur drawings look like 1000 times better then mine mrgreen ]
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Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 1:20 am
keepingtheblade her hair seems odd to me, it almost looks like a different style of hair
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