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Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 5:53 pm

Goodbye, Daddy

I say his name
Your eyes grow cold
You can’t accept
I love him so

You think it will pass
But, it won’t
You think I’ll end up with someone else
Well, I don’t!!!

If you can’t be happy
For me and my love
I’m sorry
But, I won’t give him up

Without him, I’m nothing
Why can’t you see?
That giving him up
Means giving up on me?

If I lost him
I’d be just an empty shell
How could you ask to damn
Your daughter to her personal hell?

If you truly loved me
You would accept who I’m with
If you wanted me to be happy
You wouldn’t give a s**t who that is

But, I know you love me
That’s why I don’t understand
Why you won’t be there
To offer my hand

I know you won’t be there
On my wedding day
Everyone says you will come through
But, that’s not your way

It kills me to think
That you won’t be in my life
But, I choose him over you
I choose to be his wife

Daddy’s little girl
Is who I used to be
But, in the future
Mrs. Anderson is me

I’ll cry sad tears
For losing you
But, I refuse to let myself break
Because of you

I’m sorry for not being able
To make you happy
But, if you had it your way
You’d still lose me

I love you, daddy dearest
But, I can’t make you happy
So, I will say goodbye
And for that, I’m sorry

[[please post comments - how well you liked it; what you think will make it better, etc...]]
thanks for reading!!!

Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 7:06 am

That's so sad!

It makes me feel all emo and stuff...

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Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 8:12 am

Saira-La

That's so sad!

It makes me feel all emo and stuff...

aaw....well, sorry for making you sad!!!

...........do you like it tho?! even though it's sad...!?

Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 1:13 pm

It's really good.
The first bit of it doesn't quite flow as well as the rest of the poem.
Not sure why.
Maybe it's just me though ^.^;;;;;
But ish is good.

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Baby Athena
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Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 8:24 pm

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It's really good.
The first bit of it doesn't quite flow as well as the rest of the poem.
Not sure why.
Maybe it's just me though ^.^;;;;;
But ish is good.

thank you Toxic!!!
i'll see what I can do about the whole not flowing thing though!
(It's a poem that has been in the works for about 2 months....yeah, my dad is still acting like that!!! gonk )
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 1:22 pm

Athena_Rose

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It's really good.
The first bit of it doesn't quite flow as well as the rest of the poem.
Not sure why.
Maybe it's just me though ^.^;;;;;
But ish is good.

thank you Toxic!!!
i'll see what I can do about the whole not flowing thing though!
(It's a poem that has been in the works for about 2 months....yeah, my dad is still acting like that!!! gonk )
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Bold-ness o___o;;;
Welcome though.
Two months?
>.< Tell yer' dad I'll kick 'em in the nuts.

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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 3:02 pm

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Athena_Rose

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It's really good.
The first bit of it doesn't quite flow as well as the rest of the poem.
Not sure why.
Maybe it's just me though ^.^;;;;;
But ish is good.

thank you Toxic!!!
i'll see what I can do about the whole not flowing thing though!
(It's a poem that has been in the works for about 2 months....yeah, my dad is still acting like that!!! gonk )
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Bold-ness o___o;;;
Welcome though.
Two months?
>.< Tell yer' dad I'll kick 'em in the nuts.

hehe....yay for bold-ness!

Yes, two months of this crap...
lol. um, no....I love my dad, even though he's being horrible about Alucard sad It's sad.

anyways............i'm happy right now because prom is in a week and a half......though I do think the whole prom thing is stupid I'm still going with Alucard because all of my friends will be there and there's going to be a jazz band and Alucard gets to go up and play his trumpet with the Jazz band for a couple songs!!! whee (that was off topic, but i'm excided!)

Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 5:39 pm

Athena_Rose

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Athena_Rose

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It's really good.
The first bit of it doesn't quite flow as well as the rest of the poem.
Not sure why.
Maybe it's just me though ^.^;;;;;
But ish is good.

thank you Toxic!!!
i'll see what I can do about the whole not flowing thing though!
(It's a poem that has been in the works for about 2 months....yeah, my dad is still acting like that!!! gonk )
heart

Bold-ness o___o;;;
Welcome though.
Two months?
>.< Tell yer' dad I'll kick 'em in the nuts.

hehe....yay for bold-ness!

Yes, two months of this crap...
lol. um, no....I love my dad, even though he's being horrible about Alucard sad It's sad.

anyways............i'm happy right now because prom is in a week and a half......though I do think the whole prom thing is stupid I'm still going with Alucard because all of my friends will be there and there's going to be a jazz band and Alucard gets to go up and play his trumpet with the Jazz band for a couple songs!!! whee (that was off topic, but i'm excided!)

Weeeeell.
I could still kick him in the nuts lightly.
It doesn't do TOO much damage.
But it's cool.
It's like a slap.
Too wake 'em up.
Is what I meant.

That's awesome.
It's cool that you'll have a jazz band rather than the stupid rap stuff everyone is getting into.

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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 5:43 pm

your poem.. is soo beautiful.. and i know i'll have to tell my dad that someday because idk if he'll accept meh bf >.<

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