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stephy777

PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 1:51 pm


It was dark and stormy and I had to sit in the back of our car with my little brother. We were on our way to Aunt Milly's.It is her birthday and we had to travel from Vermont to Florida. Why me!
I'm Celia, I'm 16, about 5'4, blond hair and blue eyes. My evil little brother is Kevin, 13, brown hair and green eyes. His hobbies are the following, annoying my friends and I, destroying my stuff, messing with my bras(I almost strangled him with one) and eating my homework. And sadly I have to tell my teachers that, " My little brother ate my homework." when clearly I have a better chance with " My cat is joggling bowling balls!" So already you could tell my life is torture! And what makes my day everyday, I have to deal with my dad's snotty girlfriend! Her name is Bailey, she has blond hair and hazel eyes, she is 28 (10 years young then my dad!) she is really short (not midget short). I hate her because she came into the picture 3 weeks after my mom died. And I think my dad was cheating on her.
Well anyway, My aunt's birthday is in 3 days, and my dad picked the stormiest night to go to her house. My mom never would have made us travel this far for a party, but Bailey had to butt in and tell him it's her birthday and it would be right to go. She only wanted to go because there were many party's to go to and she loves to party.
I was looking out the window and we were about 2 minutes from my aunt's and I saw a really cute guy just walking up the street, and when we reached my aunt's I sat outside and just waited. I'm not going to stalk him, but I could see if he lives nearby. He was walking past my aunt's and I was thinking he would keep going pass this house and the next, but he walked into the house next door. Yay! He lives next door.
I was about to go inside when someone yelled,
"Hey...you over at Milly's house!" a guys voice yelled to me.
"Yes?" I turned to see who was calling me and I was the guy I was watching.
"Who are you and why are you at evil Milly's?" He said looking scared to be looking this way.
"She's my evil aunt....why do you call her evil?" I said with interest.
"Oh she just sprays anyone who even walks by her house and looks at it with her hose" He said nodding his head.
"I'm um Celia, and you?" I said with a smile
"I'm," someone interrupted him:
"Get in here, and don't ever talk to anyone at Milly's, you know the stories!"
"Ok 'mom' I'll talk to you at the park later around 3 please." He said and I nodded in agreement.

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I have a lot written, so if you are dieing for more, just pm me and I'll get more up >.<
PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 2:03 pm


Oooh this is seems like a Romeo and Juliette type story! Can't Wait For More!

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stephy777

PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 2:08 pm


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Oooh this is seems like a Romeo and Juliette type story! Can't Wait For More!
O.o im waiting for your uppydate!
PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 2:11 pm


stephy777
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Oooh this is seems like a Romeo and Juliette type story! Can't Wait For More!
O.o im waiting for your uppydate!

LoL, I shall go finish it now! I'm like one quarter done.... hee hee.

I have another story on here too if you wish to read it (if you haven't already that is). It's called TeEnAgErS. (Yes I'm guilty for writing like that XP)

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stephy777

PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 2:31 pm


It was only 2 now, so I had to wait another hour. I still didn't know his name, all I could find out was he is about 5'4" , has hazel eyes with dark hair, Only by looking at him though, I still didn't know his name.
"Oh, Celi, look what I found!" Kevin yelled from the kitchen. I walked in and saw him with my bra on his head, he looked like a 2 year old.
"Kev! Give it here or all your little friends back in Vermont will find out about your little problem!" I yelled in his face grabbing my bra.
"No! You promised you would never tell anyone I...." He started to whisper , "wet the bed." He looked in both direction making sure no one heard him.
It was about 2:45 now, so I started to walk to the park. We had passed
it on our way here. He was hanging around the swings. It was weird I just stopped and looked at him, admiring him.
"Hey Celia! Over here." He said, so I walked over and sat on a swing.
"I'm Frank, Frank Iero, I'm 16." He put his hand out waiting for me to shake it. So I took his hand, warm and soft sweet hand.
"Celia Cantina 16 also." I said still shaking his hand.
We walked around talking about my aunt, Florida and everything that we could think of until we realized it was dark.
"I should get back to my aunt's, my dad is likely to call the cops and telling them I have gone missing." We laughed.
"I'm always out this late. It really is the best time of day here." Frank said looking at the stars, they made his eyes sparkle. So I smiled at him and looked at the stars.
He walked me back to my aunt and his mom saw him talking to me and ran to him in that very second.
"Frank! I told you not to talk to anyone here!" She scolded him.
"But mom she is not like Milly!" Frank protested.
"That is not the point, she is related to that witch!" She grabbed him by the arm and dragged him in their house.
I forgot to ask about the stories. I thought after I walked in the house. If I had to live here, I would at least like to know what is so bad about my aunt. So right at that moment I told myself to ask him tomorrow when we met at the park again.
Like yesterday I walked to that park at 3. He was there again, so I was happy. I asked him about the stories and he told me that my aunt is a real live witch and she cast spells in her basement. I am 16 now and ghost stories about witches I knew were not true, but I went along with it anyway.
"She once cased a spell on my friend Mikey, and he couldn't move for a week!" Frank said in a whisper.
"My aunt would do no such thing!" I protested.
"But the problem is that she did. I don't want to believe that such a nice old lady is a witch but I have to!" He said sarcastically.
"Well if you want to be that way, then...I'm leaving." I got up from the swing I was sitting in and walked back to my aunt's. I mean come on, he is 16 and he still believes in ghost stories!
PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 3:08 pm


I like it! Can't wait for more!

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 3:23 pm


What Melody Of Tears Said
PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 4:57 pm


I sat in the kitchen the next day wondering if I should meet him at the park again.
"Celi?" Kevin asked.
"Yes Kev?" I replied.
"My arm hurts." He said and I looked at him and saw his arm swollen and puffy.
"Kev! What did you do?" I asked jumping from my seat looking at his arm.
"I was playing with a kid at the park and we were on the monkey bars and I fell and it hurts. Celi I want it to stop!" He yelled like a 6 year old even though he was13.
"Aunty Milly! Dad!" I yelled, and they came into the kitchen. I told them I would drive him to the hospital. I have my licence by the way.
When we got to the hospital we waited to be called on, when I saw Frank.
"Hey." I said as he passed us with some girl I haven't met yet.
She had blue eyes, brown hair, and looked to be 5'4"
"Hey Celia." he said and sat down.
"Kevin Cantina?" A young girl around 22 asked for Kevin and I.
"Here." I said walking with Kevin to her desk.
She ask for his information and when I given it all to her, she put us in a room and we waited for 20-30 minutes until the doctor walk in.
"Kevin, hey how are you. I'm Dr. Kelly." She said looking at his arm.
"Good," he said then under his breath.
"Now." I could tell he was enjoying this trip to the ER.
"I'll have someone take him to X-ray." she said picking up her walky talky and calling for someone.
2 minutes later a big hairy guy walked in the room and asked if Kevin would come with him. Kevin's smile left his face in an instant, as he walked with this guy out of the room, and all I could do was laugh!
He can back and we sat for another 20 minutes till Dr. Kelly came in with the results.
"Yep...sure is a broken arm." She said pointing at a line in the X-ray picture.
"Well now I hope he has learned not to do stupid things!" I said looking his way.
"Nope not one bit!" He said laughing in my face.
"Well we will put his arm in a cast and he can go home." she told us.
"I bet he wishes he could stay with you." I said under my breath.
She finished putting on his cast, it was pink. So like him to pick a color that the female doctor likes. We went home and ate dinner. It was around 5 now and Frank is usually at the park, so I walked down to see if he was there and he was. But he was with the girl he was with at the hospital. I thought for a minute to see if I wanted to go to talk to him and I decided why not.
'Hey Frank!" I said walking up to him.
"Oh hey." He said with a smile.
"Who's this?" I asked.
" Oh Celia, Laurel, Laurel, Celia. She is my girlfriend." He said and it broke my heart.
"Hi." I said to her, not showing how I felt about her.
"Um, hi." She said shyly.
I talked to them for about a half hour and went home. I couldn't believe that he was taken...well I could, he was so perfect, sweet, kind...and my least favorite sarcastic.

stephy777


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PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 5:22 pm


Awww no more romeo juliette. Now it's romeo and some other chick featuring juliette.
PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 6:03 pm


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Awww no more romeo juliette. Now it's romeo and some other chick featuring juliette.
lol, wow. I guess u dont like laurel

stephy777


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PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 6:15 pm


stephy777
BREAK_down_CHILD
Awww no more romeo juliette. Now it's romeo and some other chick featuring juliette.
lol, wow. I guess u dont like laurel

No..... not really. I like Celia better, she seems more like me. ^^ (I like me)
PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 6:25 pm


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stephy777
BREAK_down_CHILD
Awww no more romeo juliette. Now it's romeo and some other chick featuring juliette.
lol, wow. I guess u dont like laurel

No..... not really. I like Celia better, she seems more like me. ^^ (I like me)
lol, well ill post another chapter, im so close to the end in my story i think i have like 11-12 chapters

stephy777


stephy777

PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 6:41 pm


I haven't talked to him in a day....I better check my phone, he may have called. I checked it and like I guessed he called. He left a message so I decided to check it.
"Hey Celia. This is Laurel, just wanted to tell you....to stay away from Frank. If you even dare go near him, you will pay! Well ok now bye!" I was shocked. I must have seemed like a threat to her, but why?
I was so confused and I didn't want to be. I mean Frank has a girlfriend, who hates me and I don't know why! I just wanted to go down to the park and hang myself on the monkey bars! But I didn't.
I walked to the park and found that Frank wasn't there, so I walked up to his house, knocked on his door. His mom answered.
"What did your aunt do to my Franky!" She yelled as she opened the door.
"My aunt? What?" I was confused.
"Frank is gone, he's not at Laurel's, not at the park and he hasn't been home since yesterday." she started to cry.
"Um...Laurel, she lives where?" I asked her.
"Two houses down...I mean you don't need to know." she said slamming the door in my face.
Two houses down, I thought. I walked there and looked around. No one seemed to be home, so I walked into her yard. I found a large thing under a big blue blanket. Something moved under the blanket, so I uncovered it.
"Frank!" I yelled finding him in a large cage.
"Eliya." He said something but I couldn't tell with the tape over his mouth.
I opened the cage and took the tape off.
"Oh Celia, you found me! You saved me from her, she can't get me!" he yelled hugging me and kissed me.
"Whoa, what, who, WHAT?" I yelled. But just then something went over my head, and I blacked out.
I woke up screaming and looked around. I found myself in my bed and it was morning. It was all a dream. I was glad for one part, but wished that the kiss wasn't fake.
I walked down to the park, this time he was there and so was she. I walked over to them and waved. Frank waved back but Laurel just gave me a dirty look.
"Celi, hey." Frank looked at me.
"Franky, hey to you too." I smiled and looked at Laurel, she had a look of death in her eyes, but she smiled like an angel when Frank looked over.
"So Laurel...how's the act going?" I questioned. Frank just looked confused.
"Great...now please don't ruin the surprise." she look Franks way. He didn't look confused now.
"Funny, you sounded different on the message you left me." Frank looked at me confused again.
"What is going on?" Frank looked at us both.
"Just listen to the sweet little message your girlfriend left me." I said playing it out loud.
'Laurel?" he questioned her with even more confusion.
PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 6:52 pm


HA HA HA! That B!tch deserves it! DUMP HER FRANKIE! DUMP LIKE THERE IS NO TOMORROW! ..... sorry, I had sugar again xp ...... I love this story!

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stephy777

PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 6:55 pm


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HA HA HA! That B!tch deserves it! DUMP HER FRANKIE! DUMP LIKE THERE IS NO TOMORROW! ..... sorry, I had sugar again xp ...... I love this story!
lol, yeah and when i get to the part where i have my recent writers block, i fear ur murder me for more....as my friend wasnts to for a different story >.>
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