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 Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 12:07 pm
WOOT! MY NEW STORY! WOOT WOOT WOOT! Okay, must calm down *deep breaths*. Okay I'm good whee . Anyways Here's the prologue. Sorry that it's so short.
Prologue-
I sat in the bathroom as the tears rolled down my cheeks and staind my pink skirt. My blonde hair waving infront of my thin body. How I hated what i had become. And for what? Popularity? To Become Home Coming Queen? To Be Socially Acceptable? I didn't want that anymore, all I got out of it was an eating disorder, bleach blonde hair and a hideous wardrobe filled with pink and baby blues. All I wanted was my old life back. My friends, my clothes, my personality and most of all my brother. More tears started to pour as I remembered what my beloved brother Frank had told me just a few days earlier.
"You're Not My Sister, I Don't Even Know Who You Are Anymore." I had replayed that in my mind at least one million times, the hurt look on his face, the sound of disgust in his voice. Frank used to be the only person I was really close to, besides Gerard and Mikey that is. But I wasn't as strong as him and I soon found myself following trends, ditching them to go shopping with the popular girls and worst of all making fun of them so I would fit in. They hated me, they might not admit it but I know they do. Why did I have to do it? I could have confided in them and they would of helped. But I couldn't ask for their help now, they would either laugh at me or just walk away. That made me cry even more.
Okay So If You Want To Know What Happens Then You Must Comment.
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 1:08 pm
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 1:50 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 12:11 pm
YAY! COMMENTS! PEOPLE LIKE THE NEW STORY! Anyways here we go TIME FOR.......
Chapter 1
~8 Months Ago~
"WAKE UP!" Frank yelled as he jumped on me while slept.
"OOF! Frank what the hell are you doing?" I asked as I rubbed my eyes.
"FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL, FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL, FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL!" He yelled as he started to jump on my bed.
"Come on, I'm younger I need the sleep." I whinned as I tried to cover my head with the pillow.
"One hour younger." He corrected, pulling the pillow from my hands. It was obvious to everyone that we were twins. We were pretty much exactly the same, except for a few mionor differences. I reluctantley got out of bed and pushed him out of my room so I could get dressed.
"COME ON ARE YOU ALMOST READY!?!?" Frank asked, knocking rapidly on the door. I opened it only to have him fall from leaning on the otherside.
"COME ON! TIME FOR SCHOOL!" I yelled as I threw his schoolbag at him. We ran to the bus stop only to find out our two bestfriends weren't even there yet.
"Where are those numbskulls?" I asked looking up and down the road. Suddenly someone covered my eyes with their hands, causing me to scream in fear.
"Gues Who!" The person sang into my ear.
"Gerard! You scared the hell out of me!" I said as I turned around and gave him a hug.
"Morning." He said hugging me back.
"Where's Mikey?" Frank asked. I looked around and realized that Gerards brother Mikey wasn't here.
"Sick with the flu." Gerard said, rolling his eyes.
"Well then, looks like we're coming over to your house after school!" I said as the bus pulled up to the curb. We ran to the back and sat at our usual seats.
The bus stopped outside of the school and we walked off, laughing at a joke Frank had just told us.
"LOOK IT'S THE FREAKS!" Someone yelled as a handful of rocks came flying towards us, hitting me on the cheek and leaving behind a large cut.
"AIDEN! Are you okay?" Frank asked, rushing over and checking the cut.
"Yeah....yeah I'm fine." I said, snapping back to reality. We walked into the school just as the bell rang and went to our classes, I was in a different class from Frank and Gerard. I sat in the back of the class and put on my headphones, I mouthed the words to Nirvanas 'Smells Like Teen Spirit'. That is until the teacher saw me sining and took my ipod from me.
"b***h." I muttered as she walked back to her desk. Three and a half hours later the bell sounded and the whole school ran to the cafeteria for the best and worst time of day, lunch.
Hope you liked it, and PLEASE COMMENT! heart
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Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 12:14 pm
COMMENT! write more, pleeaaassee. !Este es muy interesante! hooray for my spanish class....
i'm kinda hyper to-day, seeing as I have a snow day, but whatever!
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 7:36 pm
Sorry I haven't updated in like forever but I have some writers block, but since it's march break and I have all week I'm hoping to get at least 2 updates up before the break is over
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 9:25 am
I love it! <33 Write more! I wanna know what happens..
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 10:39 am
Told you I'd have this up soon!
Chapter 2
My footsteps echoed down the empty hallway, unfortunetly it wouldn't be empty for long. As if on que a stampede of people came running down the hallway in search of one thing. Food, the thought of it brought a sense of sickness to the pit of my stomach. I've always had problems with food even if Frank, Gerard and Mikey refused to believe it. I was pulled away from my thoughts by the feel of a hand on my shoulder. I turned around to see the one person I wished to forget I ever met. Krissy Tankovic, the worst female bully in the whole school, well she wasn't as much of a bully as an executioner.
"I've waited all summer to get you." She said as an evil smile came across her face and her arm raised to the height of my face. A split second later her fist made contact with my eye and I doubled over in pain. She just laughed and walked away as I stayed there, tears rolling down my face as I felt a bruise appear over my entire eye.
"Aiden?" I heard a framiliar voice say. I looked up and saw Gerard and Frank standing at the end of the hall, they ran towards me as the saw my eye.
"Oh my god are you okay?" Gerard asked as Frank looked over my eye, Frank had always been good with first-aid. They helped me to my feet and we walked to our usual table in the far corner of the cafeteria. We didn't sit there because we wanted to, we sat there because we weren't allowed anywhere else (well thats what the jocks say).
"Anyone want my lunch? I'm not eating today." I said pushing my food away from me. Frank and Gerard gave me a suspicious look.
"Why aren't you eating." Frank asked, worry in his voice.
"Because I don't want to." I said in an end-of-conversation voice. Frank just took the food and put it in his bag.
"How was math?" Gerard asked, noticing the large math book sticking out of my bag.
"Crappy, that b***h teacher took my ipod." I said, thinking of a painful death that I wished she would die from.
"Stop thinking like that." Frank said.
"How did you know what I was thinking?" I asked dumbfounded.
"Twin telepathy, duh." Frank said, taking a bite from his sandwhich. Yes sometimes me and Frank did seem to share a brain, I could read his mind if I concentrated hard enough, he could do the same and he took advantage of that.
"Get outta my head." I said, covering my head with my hands. Gerard just sat there and laughed, so I flicked on of Franks grapes at him. Soon enough the three of us got into a mini food fight.
"Come on, lets go outside and finish our food." Gerard said as he stood up and walked out of the cafeteria, Frank and me following him out. We sat on the stairs outside of the soccer field and finished eating.
"Thirsty, Frank?" I asked seeing my brother search for his water bottle.
"Yes! Those chips were salty as hell." He said as I handed him a small cup filled with iced tea. Just as he was about to drink one of the jocks sitting at a picnic table threw a sandwhich at him.
"Aww, he spilled my tea." Frank said, frowning slightly. Gerard shook his head, I let out a small giggle when I saw that the tea had spilled on his pants making it look like he had an accident. Frank looked down and started laughing too.
"I'll be back in a few minutes, I have to try and run home to get a new pair of pants before lunch is over." He said as he started running.
"I hope he knows he's going the wrong way." Gerard said, letting out a small laugh.
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 12:44 pm
Aww, hucking a sadwich at poor Frankie!
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 6:42 pm
haha! nice. for some reason, that reminds me of when i went out to dinner with my friend and some of her friends, and it was friday, and they were catholic, so they couldn't eat meat, and I was doing a ha-ha song, singing, "I'm Episcopalion, ha ha ha ha ha ha!" and what not...
so, yeah. *ahem*
keep on writing, please!
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 7:10 pm
It's Late......... To Tired To Say Anything Here.
Chapter 3
It was the end of the day and I had no clue where Frank was. He wasn't the type to skip school and not tell anyone. I walked around the front of the building and found Gerard.
"Gerard! Where's Frank?" I asked, when I noticed that he wasn't here either.
"I don't know, he didn't come back to class." He said.
"OH s**t!" I screamed, Gerard instantly knew what I was worried about and we ran to where we thought Frank was. The haunted creek. We only called it haunted so nobody would go there, it was a small creek we came across when we were walking down a path from Gerard and Mikey's backyard. It lead straight to the school with no obstacles, except for the creek which went straight through the path. Gerard had tied a rope around a branch of an old tree and we would swing across the stream, we never got around to building a little bridge. We ran as fast as we could to the creek. I screamed when we got there. On the other side of the creek was Frank, the rope must have snapped mid-swing and he hit his head on a rock. I started going down the edge to go through the water but Gerard held me back.
"I have to help him!" I cried as he pulled me back.
"You're not going through the creek, the current is too strong and who knows whats in that water. You stay here, I'll go around the other way." He said as he ran back down the path. I sat there for what seemed like an hour though it was probably only 5 minutes. I couldn't take it, I couldn't watch my brother lay there bleeding. I jumped to my feet and started edging my way down to the water. As soon as I put my feet in I knew it would be easier said then done. The current was much stronger then it looked and the water was up to my elbows and freezing cold. I started walking across, clinging to rocks that were close by. Suddenly I felt a sharp pain in my foot, I must have cut it on something. I didn't care I just kept walking. I finally made it to the other side and struggled as I climbed up onto flat ground. I crawled over to Frank and lifted up his head, brushing his hair away from his face.
"Please be okay Frank." I whispered as I hugged his motionless body and started to cry. I soon heard Gerard running towards us and a gasp as he saw me beside Frank.
"I Told You Not To G--" Gerard started but stopped as he heard my crying. He knelt down by me and put his hand on my shoulder.
"Come on Aide' we have to take him home." He said softly as he picked up Frank and helped me to my feet. I let out a cry of pain as I stood on my left foot and fell back to the ground.
"Aiden! What's wrong?" He said, placing Frank back on the ground.
"My foot!" I cried, tears of pain rolling down my cheeks. Gerard gasped as he saw my foot, I looked down and did the same thing. Gerard was right to tell me not to go through water, I had stepped on something sharp and there was now a large cut down the bottom of my foot. Why was I being hurt so much today? I slowly stood up and balanced myself on one foot, Gerard picked up Frank and we made our way back towards the Way's home. We went to the back door and I leaned against the house, knocking loudly to get Mikeys attention. We soon heard footsteps coming towards the door and were greeted by the worried face of Mikey Way.
"What happened?" Mikey asked after we sat down in the living room.
"Frank hit his head on a rock and I stepped on something pointy." I said, wrapping my foot up in a bandage. I looked at Frank, he was laying beside me and was still unconcious.
"He'll be okay Aiden." Gerard said, noticing the worry on my face. I lifted his head onto my lap and looked for a cut, luckily there was only a small cut above his eyebrow.
"When's he going to wake up?" I asked after an hour had passed. Suddenly Frank started coughing.
"FRANK!" I exclaimed as he opened his eyes.
"AIDEN!" He gasped, giving me a hug.
"What about me? I hauled your unconious a** all the way here!" Gerard said, pouting. We all couldn't help but laugh at Gee, his face looked extremely funny.
"Well then, I can see I'm not appreciated here." Gerard said, sticking up his nose in a very snobbish way and walking out of the room. I got up and ran after him, jumping on his back as he walked into his room. He let out a small scream which made me start laughing harder.
"Get off." Gerard said, laughing as well. He threw me onto his bed and fell on me.
"OOF! You are a lot heavier than you look." I said.
"Thank you?" Gerard said, raising an eyebrow. He was too cute to laugh at, I just hugged him. He pulled away and stared into my eyes, a smile coming across his face.
"Do you wanna kiss me?" I said in my most seductive voice.
"Thinking about it." Gerard said his smile doubling in size. I slowly lifted my head up and our lips met. Unfortunetly 5 seconds later we were interrupted by a very loud
"WOAH!" We looked over and there was Mikey and Frank standing in the doorway, suprised looks on each of their faces.
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 5:48 am
Love it! Keep it up! biggrin heart
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:29 pm
Quote: "What about me? I hauled your unconious a** all the way here!" Gerard said, pouting. We all couldn't help but laugh at Gee, his face looked extremely funny. Loved that part. xDD
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:29 pm
` E m o N e r d Quote: "What about me? I hauled your unconious a** all the way here!" Gerard said, pouting. We all couldn't help but laugh at Gee, his face looked extremely funny. Loved that part. xDD Lol Me Too xD
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:17 pm
oh, wow! please update! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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