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Bajynah

PostPosted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 2:47 pm


Fate At Hand:

Oh dreaded messiah
We follow in your path
Your puppets of society
Destroying lives of innocence

Terror is at hand
The hand controls these puppets
Sending them to the great sacrifice
War is a great one at that

We are the new slaves
Slaves to the gun
All I ask is why
Why choose to defend these lies

Fate can be a faithful ally
Or the greatest enemy
We wait for our time
Standing in this heinous line

Hell meets us at the end
The puppet master chooses when
Why do we stand in this line
Just stand off to the side

We trust him with our lives
Sitting upon a throne of lies
Higher the throne raises
Will anyone see the changes

Pray to your master
And the throne will not cease
He listens to the lies
Won't he hear our cries
?


Sickness Fills My Room:
I lay here in my room
Pain surging as I stay
Switching positions continuously
No goal of releif yet to be accomplished

I continue to lay
Light breaths escape
I close my eyes in attempt to fade
Still no progress towards my goal

Awakened by a forceful cough
I weeze in pain as it continues
It finally ends with a sigh
Holding my chest gasping

Waiting for time to end
Death hovers above where I stay
Yielding for the right moment
When he strikes I will know

My breathe will collapse
The pain will come to hault
No sounds will escape my mouth
I will not be of this world


Yup...
These are my first two official poems.
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 7:26 pm


Anyone like em'?

Bajynah


AbbygaleNyx

PostPosted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 6:28 pm


I liked them, very much. Nice imagery.. Very well depicted.
PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 2:54 pm


Danke ^^

Bajynah

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