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 Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 4:30 pm
Spellbound
Anthony Davis
The Fire cools, The Wind burns
The Water scars, The Earth soothes
When Time is done, and Life begins
The Earth stands still, and Heaven spins
Wisdom will come clear, and Choices too
Will tie my Heart, Forever to You
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 4:39 pm
Abstract, but extremely, extremely random.
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