Welcome to Gaia! ::

The Official My Chemical Romance Guild!

Back to Guilds

 

 

Reply MCR Fan-Fiction!!
TeEnAgErS [PG-13] [What Did You Think?] Goto Page: 1 2 3 ... 4 ... 7 8 9 10 [>] [»|]

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Like It?
Yes
86%
 86%  [ 20 ]
No
13%
 13%  [ 3 ]
Total Votes : 23


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 2:51 pm


This is my first fan fic so don't be too hard on me. I hope you guys like it!
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the guys from MCR. (not that I don't want to)



Chapter one

It was nearly the end of the day and my hands were convered in sweat. I knew I shouldn't be so nervous, but I was. The fact that my best-friend that I've had a crush on since 7th grade had finally asked me out on a date scared the living hell out of me. What if it doesn't work out? What if I make a foo of myself? I thought as the teacher assigned homework. I took the worksheet and ran to my locker when the bell sounded. I threw my books into my bag and made a dash for the door when I fell on my face. "What the f***!" I yelled as I looked up. "I'm so sorry, it was an accident." Said a boy that looked a lot like a hotter version of Harry Potter. He reached his hand out to help me up. I completely ignored it and stood up on my own. "It's okay," I said rubbing my head which had begun hurting from the fall "Just watch where you're going next time." He nodded and scurried away. I walked out of the front door and ran to my car. I sat there for a momment looking at myself in the mirror. My lipring sparkled in the sunlight, I fixxed my eyeliner and started the car. It only took me a few minutes to find the small cafe we were meeting at. I checked myself in the mirror one last time and made my way to the cafe. I walked through the doors and saw Frankie sitting in the far corner, he looked over at me and waved, a huge grin came across his face. I couldn't help but smile too as I walked towards him. Thats when I saw her, a perky little blonde girl sitting right beside Frankie, her arms wrapped around his neck. I thought I was gonna be sick but I kept my cool and sat down. "Hey Kyla! Whats up?" Frankie asked his grin still plastered on his face. "Hi. Who's your girlfriend this week Frankie?" I said with a slit bit of jealousy. "Ha ha very funny Kyla. This is Georgia, Georgia meet my bestfriend Kyla." Frankie said with one hand wrapped around Georgia's waist and one playing with her hair. "Hi it's nice to meet you, Frankie never stops talking about you." Georgis said, she had a slight southern accent and a very pretty smile. We shook hands and she went back to playing with franks hair. Thats when a very attractive boy with messy black hair came up to our table. I looked up at him with a questioning look. "Can I help you?" I said in a polite but somewhat annoyed voice. "Hey Gerard! You made it." Frank said now with an even bigger grin than before,. "Yeah. You said you wanted me to meet someone, didn't you?" Gerard said a hopeful grin on his face. "Yeah. Meet my bestfriend, Kyla." Frank said point at me. I waved and moved over so Gerard could sit at the booth with us. There wasn't much room so I was squished between Gerard and Georgia. One of which smelled very good. "I'm sorry Frankie baby but I have to go." Georgia said as she kissed him on the cheek and climbed over him to leave. "Okay bye babe." Frank said woth a small smile as she kissed him. We talked for hours, I got to know Gerard a lot better. He was a great drawer and a really good singer, even if it took an hour to convince him to sing a verse of a song he wrote. "Well I have to go. I promised my mom I'd be home around by six. See yah later guys." Frankie said as he left the booth and walked out the front doors, leaving me all alone with Gerard. What a perfect time to find out I was attracted to him.

I'll wait for a few comments before I put in the next chapter.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 2:57 pm


Wow Pretty Good For Your First Fanfic. Anyways I Like It Please Update This!
(Yay First Comment!)

ILessThan3MCR_hXc


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 2:01 pm


Only one comment? Well I'm still working on the next Chapter but I really would like some more posts, and sorry for any spelling mistakes in the story
PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 5:31 pm


It's really nice. I like it. : D
It'd be awesome to read more.
Just break up the text a bit so it's easier on the eye, please.

Thy Fair Robin Goodfellow


Spoon Raid

PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 7:16 am


oooooh i likes it heart good job! do more!
PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:29 am


f**k i don't like being kept waiting plzzz make a new one and make sure there are no typos i foud some in there that threw me off...plz hurry with the new one!

wolf_drappa_sight

1,600 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Signature Look 250
  • Cart Raider 100

Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 12:42 pm


Sorry about the typos and stuff but I'm only 13 and I'm not the best writer, and it might be a few more days for chapter 2 because I'm having major writers block. Sorry to those of you waiting I hope to have it up by wednesday
PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 1:33 pm


I'll be waiting. 3nodding

12-String Pony


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 12:21 pm


YAY! I finished earlier then expected, it's a little short but I hope you guys like it. Sorry for any spelling mistakes but this time I had my friend Leeann look it over so blame her (just kidding). Anyways here it is:

Chapter two

It was 8 o'clock by the time we left the cafe and it had gotten very cold.

"You sure you don't want my jacket?" Gerard asked as we sat in the park on the swings.

"No I'm fine." I said while my teeth chattered and I shivered uncontrollably.

"Come on lets go to my house before you die of hypothermia." Gerard said with a smile.
It only took a minute to get to his house. It was so nice, a real jersey home. As we sat on the couch eating popcorn and watching TV, the Harry Potter boy from earlier that day walked into the room.

"Gerard, do you know where I left Marty?" He asked in a worried voice.

"Who's Marty?" I asked.

"It's Mikey's pet spider." Gerard said.
I couldn't help but scream and jump onto Gerard's lap. I had been scared of spiders for years, ever since that time my brother put a spider in my sleeping bag while we were camping one summer and it bit me on the leg.


"Whoa. A little jumpy aren't we?" Gerard asked sounding amused.

"I can't stand spiders! Please go find it now before I run screaming from your house." I said in a panicked voice.

"Found him!" Mikey said, he must have left before I pointed out the fact that I was deathly afraid of spiders because right then he put Marty up to my face.
"Wanna hold him?" Mikey asked. This time I screamed then started to cry from the fear.

"MIKEY! Put him away!" Gerard yelled at Mikey. Mikey just sulked into his room a saddened expression on his face.

"Shhhh... it's okay now. The spider’s gone, you don't have to worry." Gerard said in a soothing voice.

"Are you sure?" I asked. Tears were still running down my face.

"Yes it’s gone." Gerard said. He hugged me until I completely calmed down. "You okay now?"

"Yeah I'm fine, thanks." I said blushing. Just then Gerard took my hand.

"I'll always be here for you." Gerard said with a smile. I couldn't help myself the moment was too perfect, I kissed him. That’s when I found out he was not only a good singer and artist, but he was also a great kisser.

Okay so maybe not the best but I tried, and I already have ideas for chapter three so here's a little sneak peek on some ideas:
A broken heart
A murder threat
A new character (thats a given)
An injury
A broken hearted, hatred-filled ex
Anyways those are a few things I'm thinking about. But I need comments or else you may never know what happens.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 12:38 pm


Love the new chapter! Can wait to know what happens.
Please update soon.

ILessThan3MCR_hXc


12-String Pony

PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 2:55 pm


*giggles* Spiders... xd
PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 4:29 pm


lol i got that part from a real life experience, and as most of my friends knwo I WILL scream if I see a spider, and the whole crying because one was shoved in my face has made me even more scared. (damn you Kyle!)

Punk vs Emo


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 10:23 am


no new comments sad
PostPosted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 12:31 pm


More will come when you post more! 3nodding

12-String Pony


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 5:10 pm


Okay hoping to have chapter three up sometime tomorrow or sometime on tuesday. But it will hopefully be before wednesday. I'm halfway done, hope you guys liek it.
Reply
MCR Fan-Fiction!!

Goto Page: 1 2 3 ... 4 ... 7 8 9 10 [>] [»|]
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum