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what do you think of my short, short story? |
it was awesome!!! |
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i dont think i understood..... |
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genius! |
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there should have been more kunkar in the story |
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 4:29 pm
"AnD DoTh ThOu HaVe In ThY pOsSeSiOn ThE iTeM iN qUeStIoN?" asked the Matriarch of Tonleer "qUiTe CeRtAiNlY i Do MaDaMe" replied Nerj Dak they laughed hartily "ThEn WiTh AlL hAsTe BrInG iT iN" demanded she thus the lowly Vaagneer slaves parted as a large golden box was brought into the grand hall, into the prescence of the matriarch and nerj. "WeLl I dO sAy ThIs Is A gReAt ViCtOrY tHaT tHe KiNgDoM aNd My KiN wIlL nErRy FoRgEt" nerj gave a low bow to the matriarch "I dO dEsIrE a FeAsT fOr OnE aS bRaVe As YoU SiR dAK" she said "LeT iT bE sO fOr ThE jOyS oF cOnSuMiNg ThE dElEcTiBlE dElIgHtS bRoUgHt HiThEr By YoUrSeLf WiLl Be ReCiEvEd AnD cOnSuMeD iN tHe MoSt ReAdY oF fAsIoNs" replied he, with a slight smirk appearing on his lips. "ThEn I sHaLl rEsTrAiN yOu No LoNgEr SiR" cried she and they left for the feasting hall, leaving the box in the grand hall to be guarded by five and twenty nirks. they feasted for five days and on the sixth day they declared this to be a Koomfa and began to sing and dance. artisans, troubadours, minstrals, story tellers, and even the odd kotir or two come from all over S'nagr to perform at the grand koomfa. by the sixteenth day the koomfa was stopped and the matriarch bid the performs all farewell. she then bid sir dak farewell and he road off on his Warnak in early dawn. a day after sir dak had left the matriarch of tonleer prepared herself to open the box. "BrAcE yOuR lOwLy SeLvEs" cried she thus to the vaagneer slaves the box was carefully opened and inside, the treasure of treasures, the most sought after thing since Princess Merila passed on, the thing that would make the matriarch of tonleer the most powerful being was...
TRANSMISSION INTERUPTED RECONECTING ... FILES DELETED YOU ARE NOW ATTEMPTING TO ACCESS FILES LOCKED BY THE MATRIARCH OF TONLEER ACCESSING THESE FILES IS A 3RD DEGREE OFFENCE NIRKS ARE NOW BEING SENT TO YOUR PLACE OF ACCESS PUNISHMENT FOR 3RD DEGREE OFFENCES IS DEATH BY THE HAND OF OOBLA GOODBYE END TRANSMISSION
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