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 Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2006 8:01 pm
biggrin 3nodding Yep. FanFictions. At the moment I am writing one on FanFiction.net called Luna Tinuviel. You can read it by clicking on the link. I accept anonymous reviews and they are well appriciated.
Summery of Luna Tinuviel: Seventeen-year-old Luna Tinuviel was driving herself home, late on the last day of school. Coming from a party that, by the end, left drunken classmates. Her life has already changed when she became a Sailor Scout, but it'll changed one more time when she is hit by a drunk driver and sends her to Japan; after the story Rurouni Kenshin had ended. Hours after reaching Kyoto Kenshin's son, Kenji, is kidnaped by, none other than, Shishio Makoto. Now Kenshin and the gang has to fight old rivals to save Kenji.
The other stories I am reading are Akisu-San's sequels Underneath It All and A Thousand Glowing Lights. Both, in my opinion are great stories.
Summery of Underneath It All: The story of Trust and Betrayal told from another point of view. Yamamoto Satoe-a comrade, accomplice and friend to Hitokiri Battousai.
Summery of A Thousand Glowing Lights: The sequal to Underneath It All. Satoe's mysterious past follows her to the Kamiya Dojo which sparks the curiosity of those living there...
Edit: Luna Tinuviel is finished. The last chapter was uploaded on 6/12/07 3nodding . Hope y'all enjoyed it biggrin .
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Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 11:24 am
For some reason, it's not letting me get into your story... It keeps saying 'Page cannot be displayed' crud. But don't worry too much; my internet connection isn't all that great anyway. I'm sure your story's good, though...! 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 7:30 pm
Kimiko Sakato For some reason, it's not letting me get into your story... It keeps saying 'Page cannot be displayed' crud. But don't worry too much; my internet connection isn't all that great anyway. I'm sure your story's good, though...! 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 10:30 am
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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 1:39 pm
I have a fanfic too... but I still haven't uploaded it. sweatdrop So there's not much use for it, huh?
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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 7:10 pm
Kimiko Sakato I have a fanfic too... but I still haven't uploaded it. sweatdrop So there's not much use for it, huh? Now I wouldn't say "no use". It'll improve your writing skills at least.
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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 7:13 pm
Kiarra-Chan13 I'm writing a Fanfic myself. I've only got the Prolouge tho'.... sweatdrop Here's the link:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3224664/1/ Interesting story. You may want to read through that chapter again and correct some missing words and/or possibly rephrase a sentance here and there if need be. I noticed while reading it that you had left out words in your sentances. Otherwise, great start. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 12:25 pm
Lily-Hith-Silme Kiarra-Chan13 I'm writing a Fanfic myself. I've only got the Prolouge tho'.... sweatdrop Here's the link:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3224664/1/ Interesting story. You may want to read through that chapter again and correct some missing words and/or possibly rephrase a sentance here and there if need be. I noticed while reading it that you had left out words in your sentances. Otherwise, great start. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 8:10 am
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 12:18 pm
Kiarra-Chan13 Lily-Hith-Silme Kiarra-Chan13 I'm writing a Fanfic myself. I've only got the Prolouge tho'.... sweatdrop Here's the link:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3224664/1/ Interesting story. You may want to read through that chapter again and correct some missing words and/or possibly rephrase a sentance here and there if need be. I noticed while reading it that you had left out words in your sentances. Otherwise, great start. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 12:18 pm
eek neutral xp Interesting.
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 4:19 pm
I read alot of Crack-Fics!! There really good for comedy!!!!
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 7:56 am
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:30 am
*whimper*
I read the summary... just BE CAREFUL... don't make her too powerful, and make the story flow! Give her flaws! Make her real!
Because, honestly,and please don't hurt me...
Based on the summary, she reeks of Mary Sue.
PLEASE BE CAREFUL! IT LOOKS LIKE AN INTERESTING STORY! PLEASE DON'T KILL IT!! gonk
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 6:34 pm
SilverBellsAbove *whimper* I read the summary... just BE CAREFUL... don't make her too powerful, and make the story flow! Give her flaws! Make her real! Because, honestly,and please don't hurt me... Based on the summary, she reeks of Mary Sue. PLEASE BE CAREFUL! IT LOOKS LIKE AN INTERESTING STORY! PLEASE DON'T KILL IT!! gonk don't whimper. you're fine. I will try not to kill it. Though, if you will, please explain to me what you mean by "she reeks of Mary Sue". Thanks for the comment and critizism. I shall try to make the story better. Least, as better as I can sweatdrop . *nervous laugh*
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