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metocloud
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 2:26 pm


Chop out my knees from under me
Send me crashing to the floor
Do anything you want to
For I am yours.

[All the lies you've told me
Eerything you say
Somehow I have belived it
And it's made me this way

Thinking I deserve this
Terror, pain and shame
Even when they try to tell me
That I'm going up in flames]

Broken, bruised and battered
Barely recognize the world
Still I'm crawling back to your arms
That only beat and hurl

[chorus]

There's no sorrow
Not the slightest remorse
Just a period of peace
On this rugged course

[chorus]

You have me so blinded to the truth
I can't even see what's right beside me
The place I was meant for
Where I can really see
PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 5:51 pm


Wow, that's good, and odd because I was thinking about writing something like that poem

cherrilie__x
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metocloud
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 5:54 pm


Very odd...then again, we are discovering quite a few similarities, aren't we?
PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 5:55 pm


yes, so it seems we are. ^.~

cherrilie__x
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metocloud
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 6:01 pm


but then again, it's bound to happen sometimes.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 6:23 pm


^^;; yep, it's just hasn't happened in a while but similarites are nice

cherrilie__x
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metocloud
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 4:21 am


Yes, they let you know you aren't the only one out there.
PostPosted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 8:16 pm


I liked it^_^

prettykitty83105


metocloud
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 11:45 am


thank you, I'm glad.
PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 6:01 pm


lovely haha we should band together............no...lets not do that....BAND moment...haha... XD im such a geek

still_tipsy_chan


metocloud
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 1:36 pm


but you're a geek in a good way. Eveyone loves the band geeks!
PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 2:23 pm


metocloud
but you're a geek in a good way. Eveyone loves the band geeks!


And everyone loves the normal geeks like me! biggrin

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ZEEK THE GEEK

cherrilie__x
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metocloud
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 1:57 pm


you're Normal?
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^.^ just kidding!
PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 7:14 pm


Ah ha ha, aren't you the funny one? ^.^ And I am pleased to see you use the "^.^" face

cherrilie__x
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metocloud
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 2:45 pm


yes, big accomplishment there.
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