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| Why the F*** would I know that crazy b***h? ::gets pelted by shovels:: |
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 Posted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 11:14 pm
I just wanted to see some of your guys' favorite posts you've made. These don't necessarily have to be the longest or ones with more plot twists, just ones you're proud of. It's not the quantity (or spelling) it's the quality.
I have a couple good ones but I lost them all in massively long threads that I will NOT go through, or the threads have been deleted. These posts don't have to be from this guild, they can be from wherever, I just want to read a couple good ones.
I do ask that you place a little back-history in a quote above your RP in the same post, just so we know who the hell Jane-doe is and why she's half-crazy and trapped in a dungeon with a rabid bear. Actually.. that would be pretty cool.^^
Knock yourselves out
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Posted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 11:18 pm
I get to go first!!! ::twirls happily:: okies so I was browsing a help the newbs guild and I found a poorly lacking RP and couldn't help but reply. (after I reviewed his post, but nevermind that). This was his post: Itachi Ex33 He was walking wit his girl friend down an old creepy road.The air around them started to get thick and densy.he grabed his katana getining ready to stricky,he uteered to his girl friend to hide,than a thick mist apeared,out of it glowing red eyes opened,the things face became clear,it was his arch enamy.Than his enamy's han turned light,electricity apeared from it,his enamy dashed to attack his gf,splat.......blood was every were his enemy had a katana going trow his chest....but he sacrasived his life to save his belovid girl friend.he droped down on the floor with a little bit of life leaft in him.his final words to his girl friend were i..love..you....and he died. Don't gag yet. Here's mine: Celestial Lullaby His girlfriend looked at the lifeless body with cold eyes. Her entire frame was filled with disapproving hostility. Then, very gently, the girl bent down and carressed the dead man's face. She placed her rose red lips carefully over his, her mouth colder then even death could bring to his lips, and then drew back stiffly. "You were never any good at anything." With ferocity emanating from her icy eyes, Starla rose up and strode over to the monster, half out of the shadows. She smiled, although it did not reach her eyes, llifted a perfectly manicured hand, and plunged it deeply into the chest of the beast. Twisting her wrist, she dug through muscle, nerves and even crushed his ribs. Redness flowed from the screaming beast's hide, flowing in a river down his chest to pool harmlessly on the ground, dying the woman's leather shoes a deep crimson. Starla grinned maliciously. "A stupid spat between you two took away my source of food. Pity.." Her voice trailed off as she enclosed her petite hand around a mass... the beast's heart. "I have you now, brainless gutter-scum." Gingerly... almost lovingly, Starla felt around the heart, stroking it, each time bringing endless pain to the monster. Then, slowly, she crushed his heart little by little. The beast flopped around wildly, unable to escape her unhuman strength, nor the coldness radiating from her petite body. His energy waned, then deliciously, he sang out a sweet scream, flinging it above the tree line. It ended in a high-pitched wine before all life flooded his body. The only thing holding him up was Starla's arm, her hand still clutching the dead heart. Deftly, she slid her hand out of the cavity in his chest, then lowered him to the ground ceremoniously. "You bled too much for me to eat... but your insides feel ecstatic." She grinned evily, flashing two pearly white fangs that hadn't been there before. Her cold blue eyes then turned to her old boyfriend, and she smiled an evil smile. "But you my love..." On her knees she turned to his body and tilted his neck lovingly, lustingly. With an almost tearful look in her eye, she streched her jaw out and laid it on his cold skin. A relaxed, hungering look befell her face as she broke the delicate skin on his neck and dug gently into his neck muscles until she hit an artery. Unfortunately he was dead and his heart had stopped beating, but with the appropriate amount of sucking, it all came flooding into her sweet-smelling mouth.Starla closed her eyes and enjoyed the feel of his blood pouring down her throat, her eyes closed, and a happy smile descended heavenly on her open lips as she continued to suck her dead boyfriends blood. I hadn't played a vampire in a REALLY long time xDDDDDD
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 11:45 am
Awesome! Brava, two thumbs way, way up! Whoever made the first post was pretty bad, but yours was amazing, Celeste. I give it a twelve out of ten, cha! xd Never reada post that gave me chills and a good mental picture. It was sweet! OK, still feeling teh chills. *shivers*
Guess I'm second, but sadly, no good posts that I can find without about ten chacters invovled. crying I have had good posts, just none that aren't confusing to people who haven't read the entire plot.
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 4:12 pm
Yay, I know how that feels. And sometimes plots are too complicated to be put into a small quote.. but if you ever come up with one I'd love to read it!
xDDDD
Glad you got lots of imaging! I hadn't played a vampire for almost two years, and it was the thing I learned to RP with, so it holds a special place in my heart (Not the sissy I'll bite you and you bite me but the real manipulative evil dark characters that are ACTUAL vampires) so I had a lot to get out of my system!^^
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 5:21 pm
I have this freakin' long post from Ria. Like... it was around 13 paragraphs or something. It was from the karaoke in the Sakura festival. Quote: Kisa ran to the stage, her right hand clutching Asuka's left wrist. Both of their faces were covered in beads of sweat, and their hair was a bit messy. The blonde looked back at her best friend and stuck out her tongue with one eye shut. "Asuka-chan, let's sign up!" Again with the sucking up. Asuka'd face reddened as she shook her head viciously. "N-n-n-no! Y-you know h-how I feel about s-s-singing on..." The neko gulped, having trouble making the next word come out. "S-stage..." Kisa gave a thumbs up half-heartedly. "But... I'LL BE WITH YA'! It's time to show of your mad skills, baby!" Asuka raised an eyebrow. Damnit, Kisa spoke odd. Oh well, that's why everybody loved her. The lovable girl grinned and ran off, leaving a very anxious teen behind. She returned about 3 minutes later with a beaming face.
"Ok! We're SIGNED UP!" She exclaimed, her high-pitched voice ringing inside Asuka's ears. It may be annoying to strangers, but Kisa was the one who had saved Asuka from herself all those years ago. She'd gotten quite used to it and, even though she hated to admit it, Kisa's voice was very comforting. Annoying, squeaky, childish... but heart-warming. The neko nodded shakily and they sat down to watch the others until it was their turn. Kisa hummed an unknown melody, dragging her shorter pal behind her. The dragged girl was groaning and whining, crying and complaining. She sounded like a child. The blonde girl pointed at the song selections.
"s**t, Asuka, I don't know any English songs." Kisa whispered angrily. Asuka nodded. "Yeah, me neither." She mumbled. They scanned the list and both of their faces brightened when they saw a familiar song. Eternal Snow. The neko punched in the number and they both rushed onto the stage, hunching together to get in range of the microphone. The song started playing and both girls smiled as she familiar melody reached their ears. The blonde and brunette opened their mouths, waiting for the song to start so they could sing for the crowd.
Kimi wo suki ni natte Dorekurai tatsu no kaNA?
Kimochi Fukurande yuku bakari de
Kimi wa Kono omoi kidzuiteiru no kana?
Ichido mo kotoba ni wa Shitenai kedo
Asuka's long hair bobbed up and down as she tapped her foot to the unforgotten melody. Her honey-coloured kimono folded and unfolded easily in the knee area as she moved slightly. She had been wearing her bottom-long hair down for once in a long while, mainly because she thought it made her look mature. She wasn't all that, she had cat ears and a tail to add to her odd appearance. Honey eyes and pale brown hair, aswell. The neko had always felt inferior to the tall girl next to her. I mean, she was everything Asuka wasn't. Tall, blonde, beautiful, slender, charming... and HUMAN. Asuka used to be human, or as human as she could get. One day she had woken up and her human ears were gone. In their place were large, black cat ears.
She glanced at the teal-eyed beauty to her side and smiled weakly as she continued to sing with her.
Yuki no youni Tada shizukani
Furitsumori Tsudzukete yuku
Kisa glanced at the girl next to her who was smiling weakly at her. Kisa felt guilty. Everybody always considered Asuka to be her sidekick, but the blonde felt as if the brunette was her other half. Her amazing, athletic, sarcastic, carming half. Kisa was just... annoying. That's what she herself thought though. She turned her wide eyes back to the audience, regaining her focus.
Hold me tight Konna omoi nara
Dareka wo suki ni naru kimochi
Shiritaku Nakatta yo
I love you Namida tomaranai
Konnan ja Kimi no koto
Shirazuni ireba Yokatta yo
Kisa and Asuka glanced at eachother again and gripped hands, the expressions on their faces extremely intense and strong. They were looking at the audience with the expression before grinning and finishing the chorus loud and clear.
Kimi wo itsumade omotteiru no kaNA?
Tameiki ga mado GARASU(Glass) Kumoraseta
Yureru kokoro Tomosu KYANDORU(Candle) de
Ima Tokashite Yukenai kaNA?
Both girls felt like the world had stopped when they looked at eachother again. Listening to the song had made them question their friendship. They both argued so often... could they grow to hate eachother so easily, then?
IMPOSSIBLE.
It was impossible, but could that be true? Kisa turned to look at her right, at the sakura trees. Her spare hands ran through her hair, tugging some strands of strawberry blonde hair out of the tie at the bottom of her locks. It blew in the wind, tickling the front of her neck. She ignored the urge to giggle like a child and scratch. The blonde's hand fell to her kimono, which was a white colour. A lilac and sky blue floral pattern played across the bottom. Her slender hand ran up and down her side nervously.
Hold me tight Oreru hodo tsuyoku
Kogarashi Fubuki ni deatte mo
Samukunai youni to
I miss you Kimi wo omou tabi
Amikake no Kono MAFURAA(Muffler)
Konya mo hitori Dakishimeru yo
Geez, this song all of a sudden seemed to lag for a very long amount of time. It was only 5 minutes though. It was agrivating both of them, bringing back memories of childhoods. But... they loved singing. Maybe they should just keep going without thinking. Without hesitating. Stepping forward instead of backwards.
Eien ni furu yukiga aru nara
Kimi he to tsudzuku kono omoi Kakuseru no kaNA?
They had both stepped back two steps so they could jump jump forward and scream out the last 3 words of the 7th (or so. >.>) verse. Large grins played on the girls' faces. Time for the last verse, then their score.
Hold me tight Konna omoi nara
Dareka wo suki ni naru kimochi
Shiritaku Nakatta yo
I love you Mune ni komiageru
Fuyuzora ni sakebitai
Ima sugu kimi ni Aitai yo
A slender hand covered a tan hand on the microphone hard, seeming to give of the feeling of saying 'I'm always going to be there.'. It seemed re-assuring. Both screamed out the last chorus enthusiastically, and both had tears in their eyes. Tears filled of mixed emotions.
Joy.
Fear.
Happiness.
Excitement.
Knowledge of friendship.
The song finished right after, and Asuka shook with excitement. Kisa rubbed her hands together. The score appeared being an 8.5. Asuka let out a happy squeal. "YAY!" She screamed, throwing a fist in the air before squeaking and Kisa turned quickly to see her falling backwards. The moron.
"AHHHHH, KISA, HELP MEEEEE!" The neko screamed in a high-pitched, scratchy voice. A look of confusion appeared on the tall girl's face before she dived onto the ground of the stage, just missing. Asuka made an odd noise and crashed noisily on the ground, moaning painfully. Kisa glanced over and blushed with embarrasment. "G-gomen!" She squeaked out. Asuka waved her hand. "No problem." Her voice was strained.
It didn't matter what other people thought about the girls. All that mattered was what the girls thought they were, and they'd remain that way for all their lives.
Best friends forever! Tiny font so nobody will bother reading it! It was horrifyingly crappy.
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 6:45 pm
: biggrin idn't read it::
That's REALLY long!
xDDD
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 7:08 pm
Yup. It was just a bit longer than one of Makie's posts I found @_@
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Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 4:37 pm
Hmm.Celeste gave me an idea...Instead of rolling my eyes, barfing, and ignoring stupid bad rp people..I can just laugh at them in my own way by making an awesome post.... twisted Mwahaha...
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Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 7:46 pm
EXACTLY!!!
This guy sucked so bad I just HAD to show him how great I was!
: razz laces hands on hips and laughs hysterically::
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Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 7:53 pm
That's one way to tell people they're bad posters, another is to put it in really big font's. Like this;
(Example, not true.)
YOU STINK AT RPING!!!!!!!!!!!!
I did that to someone last year, it was funneh. biggrin And then I got about three years worth of spam from the guy. He did get better though, I think. *shifty eyes*
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Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 7:54 pm
I'm too much of a friendship-whore to do that.
xDDDD
But for some people it would be a great alternative.
::nods::
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 6:30 pm
I personally think I stink at RPing... But I think myself much better as a writer... Also I read Rosette's post...
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 7:08 am
: razz ats Maggie's back::
Good that someone did.
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Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 3:32 pm
DAMN, YOU DID? --Sobsob--
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 5:29 pm
Rosette posts beautifully!
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