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ever feel like you weren't alone while walking in a dark place?
yeah i feel like i'm not alone sometimes
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definitaly feel alone
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was that you??
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i knew it was you!!! i just didn't know you at the time lol
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i never go anywhere in the dark
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Jdness
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 6:22 pm


ok...i dunno why but just something about the mood i'm in...i'm gonna post this writing of mine...i've never shown this one to anyone ever...or even mentioned it before...but here it is for you all to see...and i haven't decided if i'm gonna keep it up for good or not yet.... but here it is....

Night
"Dare you dive into the night, and follow me through the darkness? Could you sustain the choas which is me? For now into my world you come. The rooftops...my backyard, and the streets...my maze. In this darkness I see clearer then in the light. For this is my time now to leave the shadows and take flight. I move about like a dream...like a fog along the street, seen but still a mystery...unbeknown even unto me. Forget what you see, for you have seen nothing...for not even an onuce of my true power have i unleashed. But now come the light, and as quickly as i came, now I vanish once again...or so you think...alass I am forever here...hidden in the shadows, and the places where the light dares not to go!"


i recorded a song that goes along with this one...it's basically what this one says but i reworded it alil so it'd sound better when i sung it...if i can find the cd i put it on i'll try to upload it and put it somewhere so if anyone wants they;ll be able to listen to it...let me know what you think of this one
PostPosted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 7:13 pm


It's good I like it, keep it up

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EloraEnchanted
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 12:25 am


yeah, keep it up! Dont take any of your writings down!
PostPosted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 10:49 am


EloraEnchanted
yeah, keep it up! Dont take any of your writings down!

I agree, I like this alot cool

Shad0w_Frost
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akuma_kumori

PostPosted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 10:02 am


wow!!! this one is by far my favorite one!!!!! hopefully you can find that cd so you can post the song...i'd love to hear that
PostPosted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 11:03 pm


*hugs* I luuuv it Jd =^.^= You better not remove any of your writtings .... Not a good idea so just dont go there <_< BTW Find the CD ^_^

Savanah7
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Daggered_Thief

PostPosted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 1:16 pm


I like it. I'd love to hear the song if you find it!
PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 10:37 am


thanks, yeah i'm looking for the cd i put it on...darn me and my non-cd-labeling self stressed lol

Jdness
Crew


Shad0w_Frost
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 16, 2006 5:47 am


Jdness
thanks, yeah i'm looking for the cd i put it on...darn me and my non-cd-labeling self stressed lol

lol cool
PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 7:53 pm


Yeah, it's fantastic! Keep it. I'd like to read your other stuff too... wink

Rowan_Wulfram

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