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 Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 7:42 am
please tell me what you think of them
but dont be to mean about them
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 7:47 am
A dream
A dream about you
You gave me a rose
You treat me so tender
You take me to places
Romantic ones
You kiss me softly
You hold me close
I kiss you
So tender
So close
We are the perfect couple
To bad it’s only a dream
But this dream gives me hope
Hope that we will be together someday
Together forever
My heart belongs to you
Only to you
I hope you love me as much as I love you
This dream will never leave my thoughts
Never
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 7:54 am
A trapped soul
She was a soul
Just a soul
Nothing more
Wandering on earth
Trapped
She can’t find her way
The way up
Her soul trapped forever
Her body died
Her soul is lost
Lost forever
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 7:58 am
Without memories
A boy landed on earth
He was walking around
Wandering
Without any memory
His past was gone
He has no future
Thinking about who he can be
What is his name?
He can’t remember
No memory, no life
Looking for answers
Answers he can’t find
The world left him here
Here on his own
But why?
Why is he here?
A woman appeared
She gave him her hand
She gave him shelter
Gave him love
Raised him as her own son
She saved him from a lonely world
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 8:01 am
She’s in love
A boy so cute
She’s crazy about him
But still she’s to shy
Afraid to tell him
To show her feeling
To let them out
Why can’t she do it?
Way to shy
She looks at him
She watches his very move
Always searching for him
In her dreams, in her thoughts
Will this ever stop?
He’s all she wants
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 7:14 pm
they are very nicely written. keep it up and continue to hone your skills
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 12:25 am
Misstress_Sinthia they are very nicely written. keep it up and continue to hone your skills I agree 3nodding heart
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Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 3:24 am
You
Was it destiny?
Was it faith
The day we met
The day I will never forget
You where there for me
When I really needed someone
My world was lonely
Life had no meaning
But light appeared
The darkness was gone
Life had meaning again
It was you!
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