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BlackHawkGS

PostPosted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 7:07 pm


Wingless
by BlackHawkGS

Humans were not born with wings for a reason.


Overview:
Alright. So basically, 'Wingless' is a collection of episodes about the comical adventures of my 4 main characters' trip through outer space. The story itself actually has a plot behind it, but can admittedly be pretty random at times. The whole thing is intended to be mainly comedy, with a little bit of action and adventure thrown in for fun. Heck, I might throw in some fantasy as well.

Plot:
Quite honestly... I have NO idea where this is going. All I have written down is one paragraph that will end the series. What will happen along the way or how long it will take are a complete mystery. All to make it more fun xd . Though, I can already see the plot-holes forming...

Setting:
The story starts on Earth and heads out into my made-up universe known as the Pegasus Galaxy. Don't worry; I don't intend on making up any crazy names of places for you to remember. Hell, I named the spaceship "SpaceShip." Time period is... present. Brian, Spyke and Ritz aren't exactly known well on Earth, which explains why no one found out how they possesed an intergalactic spaceship.

Characters:

I probably shouldn't have let them write their own profiles, but here we go...

Brian:
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First Name: Brian!
Last Name: YAY!
Origin: My house!
Sex: ... YAY!
Age: 14
Weapon: ... wait, what!? Weapons!? I'm not a flippin' murderer!
Attire: Attire? What's that? Sounds French...
Favorite Food: Cookies! LIKE ZOMG!
Personality: I help kittens across the street and rescue old ladies from trees. Wait... other way around. Is that a personality?
Comments: Ever wonder why they print W's on M&M's? I don't get it...

Spyke:
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First Name: Spyke.
Last Name: ... do you really care?
Origin: Some planet within the Pegasus Galaxy. Doesn't matter.
Sex: ... I'll agree with Brian on the 'yay' comment.
Age: 18, I believe? Or 19.
Weapon: You seriously asked this question? I have no desire to weild a weapon of any sort, unless self-defense requires it.
Attire: I'm not a stupid anime character that remains in the same outfit day in and day out. So there is no specific 'attire'.
Favorite Food: Marshmellows. Mmmm.
Personality: I don't know... suppose someone who's a little uptight at times, kinda strict? Though, thanks to Brian, I've learned to loosen up a bit. I'm a pretty nice guy. Most of the time.
Comments: ...

Ritz:
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First Name: Ritz. It was displayed above. Moron.
Last Name: No one else has said their's yet. What makes you think I'll say mine?
Origin: The planet Seed. The governing planet over the Pegasus Galaxy.
Sex: Female.
Age: I believe 19 or 20.
Weapon: ... why are you asking this question?
Attire: There's a picture above. Retard.
Favorite Food: Blood... ha, you thought I was serious? Idiot.
Personality: If you haven't figured it out yet, then yes, you need to grow a brain.
Comments: Go away.

Polka:
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First Name: Polka, I guess? I think it's cool-y!
Last Name: ... bleh, I don't know.
Origin: A seed... like those thingies that make trees!
Sex: Girl! Duh...
Age: 14... 15? I dunno...
Weapon: The knife I stole from the ninja peoples! Hopefully Ritzy doesn't find it...
Attire: Polka dots!
Favorite Food: Cherries. Mmmm...
Personality: I love everybody! Except ninjas... grrrrr....
Comments: I hope all of these crazy peoples accept me. I'll do my best! Ya dots!

1 more character(s) to be added at a later date.

Currently completed episodes:

Episode 1: Pondering
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Episode 2: Starting
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Episode 3: Launching
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Episode 4: Cruising
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Episode 5: Combatting
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Episode 6: Understanding
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Episode 7: Arriving
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Episode 8: Diving
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Episode 9: Escaping
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Episode 10: Running
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Episode 11: Learning
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Episode 12: Transferring
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Episode 13: Writing
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 7:34 am


heart heart heart heart heart

KirbyVictorious


Oukow

PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 8:20 pm


I love them xD <3
PostPosted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 3:14 pm


Hilarious! It's nice to see some comedy once in a while.

The Duchess Grey

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broken_91

PostPosted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 4:25 pm


-smirks- I must admit, I do enjoy these. Make sure that you stay in character though. Spyke seemed to be drifting into Brain territory in the fourth.
PostPosted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 6:55 pm


Haha, you mean Spyke's last quote, when he said 'YES!'? It was intentional. Spyke wasn't supposed to be completely uptight, though I suppose I've given that impression through the first episodes. I'll probably try to show the cheery side of him every once and awhile, consequence of being around Brian so much.

BlackHawkGS


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 8:36 pm


XD so that means he as a stupid side too? Brian rubs off, huh?
PostPosted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 9:01 am


Exactly! Though, he doesn't rub off that much... Having 1 moron in this story is good enough for now. sweatdrop

BlackHawkGS


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PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 1:57 pm


Oh my god lol I love Brian! And Ritz! Spyke is cool too but Brian lol I haven't actually read the episodes yet but I'm heading there right now!
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:09 pm


YOu get cookies in the shape of HEARTS!!!


heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart

Gomenroia


BlackHawkGS

PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 2:05 pm


Gomenroia
YOu get cookies in the shape of HEARTS!!!


heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart


... welcome to my best friends list. *Dives headfirst into cookies.*
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 3:58 pm


*discreetly hides packet of oreos in white print in topic.*
*slips away usoing fluffy pink ninja skillz*
.... ninja

KirbyVictorious


Gomenroia

PostPosted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 2:16 pm


*Makes Popcorn cookies and waits for the new subliminal message...*


I love reading this stuff...
PostPosted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 2:42 pm


Popcorn? ... hmm... can't compare to cookies... but decent. I'll think of a new message. Right now your pic is consuming all the space of my sig (AFTER reducing it, lol xd But I still love it!!)

And Kirby, no sneaking around my thread. You'll be shot. Like all modern ninjas should be.

BlackHawkGS


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 2:51 pm


oops. 4laugh

Hahaha, you never found out that I hid the cookies right here! XD XD XD XD XD




And now, for some fluffy pink subliminal messaging.

Kirby is pink.
Kirby is awesome.
Kirby is fluffy.
Kirby is the queen of darkness.
And lightness.
Whatever.
Kirby is talking in white text.
Kirby is the mistress of the internet.
Kirby is NOT a whore *grumbles at annoying friends*
Kirby is the fluffy pink queen of awesome darkness, lightness, and the internet, who doesnt care if anyone thinks otherwise. Cause, they don't know anything about the extent of my fluffy pink power <(>.<)>
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